The Snowball

Put on your jacket
because it's cold outside
Don't forget your hat
Dad! it's really not that cold
do you want to catch your death?


Dad, are you coming?
I'll be there in a minute!
hurry up it's getting dark!
out the door he runs,
As I'm walking out the door
Splat! Snowball right in the face.



 This is actually a Tanka/Sedoka combo...Hope you like the mix
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 4:41 PM
funny
Chircop Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 3:00 PM
It was Jared..indeed ,,that Splat,,lets go get him,and make a snowman out of him:).im enjoying these sweet poems,,i really miss the snow in my country,,cant wait till i go on holiday..indeed sweet write--Charma
Owens Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 7:45 PM
Nice poem...enjoyed...Is Jared trying to blame his brother??? WE KNOW WHO REALLY DID IT!!! lol Marty
Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 1:51 PM
LOL~~Cute and just wait baby I'll catch you off guard yet....great write as always...interesting combo...Love ya sweetie...Mary
Pickett Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 12:49 PM
:JP]
Pickett Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 12:48 PM
That-a-boy Josh!!!!...:]
Richards Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 12:01 PM
Don't forget to duck next time! :) ~ Carrie
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