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The Snowball

Put on your jacket because it's cold outside Don't forget your hat Dad! it's really not that cold do you want to catch your death? Dad, are you coming? I'll be there in a minute! hurry up it's getting dark! out the door he runs, As I'm walking out the door Splat! Snowball right in the face. This is actually a Tanka/Sedoka combo...Hope you like the mix

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/5/2009 4:41:00 PM
funny
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Date: 12/4/2009 3:00:00 PM
It was Jared..indeed ,,that Splat,,lets go get him,and make a snowman out of him:).im enjoying these sweet poems,,i really miss the snow in my country,,cant wait till i go on holiday..indeed sweet write--Charma
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Date: 12/3/2009 7:45:00 PM
Nice poem...enjoyed...Is Jared trying to blame his brother??? WE KNOW WHO REALLY DID IT!!! lol Marty
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Date: 12/3/2009 1:51:00 PM
LOL~~Cute and just wait baby I'll catch you off guard yet....great write as always...interesting combo...Love ya sweetie...Mary
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:49:00 PM
:JP]
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:48:00 PM
That-a-boy Josh!!!!...:]
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:01:00 PM
Don't forget to duck next time! :) ~ Carrie
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