The Snow Is Gone

The sun rises up
 and melts the favored snow sheets 
 children's cries burst out 
 wishing it wouldn't leave yet
 but soon it will come once more
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 12, 2014 at 12:49 PM
Lovely tanka. Yes, children enjoy it the most. Thanks for your visit to my poem on the Armenian Genocide. Much appreciated.
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May 6, 2014 at 2:13 PM
Hi Ethan, i do not mind the snow... enjoyed...SKAT
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