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The Snow Falls

The Snow Falls

Softly my love, 
I watch every flake,
come slowly from no where, 
outside my vision, 
beyond the window boundaries,
magical…even whimsical…
the white soft “above”, 
to the hard ground here below. 
soon a giant blanket of pure…beauty. 

You fell asleep in my arms. 
I look down at your hair. 
It is not really…your hair. 
It is the hair from the box. 
It smells sweet, 
but not as lovely as you.
I don’t care about the strands
of lost gold…
I only want the chance 
to hold you when we are old.  

You had a bad time. 
Not for the first time. 
Not for the last. 
But I am here. 
I will be here, 
until you do not need me. 
I will be here even…
after that. 

My eyes are full of water. 
warm tears, held back…
a force of will, 
that can not be lost, 
to selfishness, 
but born heaviest against, 
piercing loss. 

Sleep now. 
Tomorrow… 
I can braid your heart, 
back together, 
so we can go out…
on the town!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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December 6, 2019 at 9:09 PM
"But I am here. I will be here, until you do not need me. " - this is what we all need in a great friend!
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December 6, 2019 at 7:03 AM
Deeply sad but extremely heart touching Ann. This was wonderful
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