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The Snake Crying

Oh my God, I hear you died for us the sinners but here where I'm, life is not so good. I have no joy though i don't struggle to work. I feel to be a lame, and someone who is blind. I have no eyes and legs to walk. Whenever i need to move, i just have to crawl whether it's hot or hot. I feed on dust when am hungry, and the son of man strikes my head whenever i meet him on the way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/28/2010 12:32:00 PM
Not a ballade nice poet person...ballades have strict rules of meter and end rhyme. BUT a very interesting write....I wish I could help you feel less hopeless, your last line is VERY powerful! Light & Love
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Date: 8/19/2010 9:41:00 AM
I am wishing you a wonderful day full of inspiration Sekitto. I thank you for sharing your poetry today. It was a pleasure to read. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/18/2010 11:55:00 AM
interesting perspective, much enjoyed
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