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The Smitten Sky - One Liner

the wink of the fireflies – twilight blushing

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2015

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December 8, 2015 at 9:29 PM

A creative one liner, David! Congrats on your win! Love, KIm

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

December 7, 2015 at 6:59 AM

Congratulations David.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

December 7, 2015 at 12:49 AM

Unique imagery .. Congrats on great win with this amazingly beautiful write david!

Andrea Dietrich

December 6, 2015 at 6:55 PM

for me, this was one for top of the podium. Congrats!

December 6, 2015 at 5:46 PM

David, Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

December 6, 2015 at 3:19 PM

Don't see too many of those anymore...well done, David...congrats.

December 6, 2015 at 2:33 PM

Dropping back with my congrats David:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 6, 2015 at 2:28 PM

- Congrats on your great "One Liners Two" image, David !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

December 6, 2015 at 2:25 PM

David, Congrats on your one liner TWO win. SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

December 5, 2015 at 7:12 PM

wow, this is TRULY a monoku (unlike mine) I LOVE this.

December 5, 2015 at 5:51 PM

Creative and beautiful! Well done, David! #7 Regards // paul

December 5, 2015 at 4:26 PM

beautiful imagery David - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx

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