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The Smitten Heart

You are the pounding thunder in my chest, Like a drum corps, with every word you speak. And when I see your smile, there is true rest And when my eyes meet yours, my knees grow weak. There is a missing piece in every soul Filled only by that one, sublimest love. There are no substitutes to fill this hole Only you, hold the place I ‘ve oft dreamt of. Come to me beloved, entwine our hearts! Be forever near me, spin close beside And sew a lifetime tether from the start That shall not fray, divinely stitched inside. Let us live a tight-knit life, full of awe; A three-cord bond of you and me and God.

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Date: 4/28/2025 3:47:00 PM
Hello tom Vales, this is romantic. with a bond of god added on. Enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your ev ening my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/29/2025 2:31:00 PM
Hello Tom Vales, Thank you for this lovely comment. Thank you Tom. I work very hard on my poetry. I do enjoy yo9ur poetry. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Tom Valles
Date: 4/29/2025 1:39:00 PM
Hi Darlene, thank you for writing. I enjoy your work. I feel very small compared to your work! Wow, you know your poetry!! :-)

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