The Smile

As a shutter clicks
Time froze;
An echo into eternity,
Every detail etched
Deep,upon my memory;
A forever experience...
Smitten by a smile of warmth,
Our love did engage
And now lives on..
Engraved.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Olayiwola Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 6:20 AM
happy win.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 4:18 AM
Congratulations on your win x
Johnson Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 7:14 PM
Cogratulations Brian. Super poem and super win. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 5:23 PM
wow, this is one of your BEST, Brian. NO wonder it did so well in the contest.Congrats!
Quigley Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 2:42 PM
Really like this one Brian. Well deserving of the top of the heap.
Merryman Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 2:13 PM
I love this poem, Brian! Congrats on your win! Kim
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:20 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Beautiful" contest Brian. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:12 PM
Oh yes....indeed a most beautiful of poems! Congratulations dear Brian. And wishes that where you are, an ocean away, Christmas is a blessing for you and your family. God Bless!
Williams Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:12 PM
Brian congrats on your win..David
P. Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 1:50 AM
absolutely stunning... this one so expressive... the image so lovely ... ~ Arany
Reynolds Avatar
August 18, 2008 at 3:50 AM
Beautiful Brian, and deserving of first place - well written forever photo. :) Blessings to you, and continues success with your art, love Kristin
George   Avatar
August 18, 2008 at 3:03 AM
Congratulations! Brian. This is truly a masterpiece!!!!! To my favorite list. sincerely, Lainie
Mcdowell Avatar
August 17, 2008 at 8:44 PM
Excellent poem! Congratulations and continued success! ~Monique
Caldera Avatar
August 17, 2008 at 5:41 PM
Congratulations Brian Awesome Poem. David Bear Caldera
Winter Avatar
August 17, 2008 at 12:50 PM
Congratulations dear Brian on your First Place win in Mark's contest! Extraordinary poem! Love, Shar
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