The Smell of Blood

The smell of blood
It's like someone unlocked the gates of my creativity 
Am not bragging 
Am just saying
This mind may need some taming

The smell of blood
It's her, wounded in infected blood, captivity
Psychotic, all the way in deep insanity
Her body, her mind, her soul no more immunity
They look at her, they are helpless, with inability

The smell of blood
The young fresh blood
Uncoagulated, smooth it flows
Puff, huff through the pipes as it blows
Curious with the new, it glows
As it moves through the lows and highs, it never slows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Vaso Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 11:30 PM
so basically a regular woman! (kidding) Loved the poem!
Hunjeri Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 11:46 PM
Lol. Did you want to mean a vampire?:-). Okay kidding too. Thank u Arthur
Nance Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 3:14 PM
get your poetic blood pumping! Nice!
Hunjeri Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 11:44 PM
Yes! Thank you Casarah.
Lovechild Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 2:47 PM
You must be a carnivore with all that blood, keep it flowing, nice write...
Hunjeri Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 11:43 PM
Lol, thank you Subby.
Nunez Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 12:35 PM
Certainly had me imagining all the things you wrote, my dear. Very descriptive. Hugs! :) Kim
Hunjeri Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 11:42 PM
Thank you Kim. Be blessed.
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