The Smallest Shofar

The rabbi had a lot of trouble
Blowing the shofar.*
The congregation waited
But the sounds were just bizarre.

Some strangled bursts of air came out
But music was resistant.
The notes he tried to play, I’d say,
Were pretty non-existent.

He tried three shofars – all were long,
The pride of any ram,
Including those who wandered
In the time of Abraham.

With children gathered at his feet,
The rabbi seemed distraught,
For with his biggest audience,
His efforts came to naught.

But then he grabbed, a last resort,
The smallest shofar yet.
Without a fancy curvy shape,
What music could he get?

He took a breath and we all smiled – 
A golden tone emerged,
Outshining all those shofars
On which somebody had splurged.

That little shofar saved the day;
Its sound was strong and clear
And hopefully, it will be first
To have a chance next year.

*a ram’s horn blown on the Jewish holiday
of Rosh Hashanah (the highlight of the service)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/16/2018 11:20:00 PM
What's a Rosh Hashana without a little drama waiting for those blasts to FINALLY emerge?...Interestingly, this year at our schule, the designated fellow blew the the shofar perfectly every time--- 100 perfect blasts each day---and you know, it was kind of a letdown. Here's to angst! ~ gw
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Date: 9/13/2018 5:17:00 PM
Interesting, informative, clever, and fun to read Ilene.
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Date: 9/12/2018 3:58:00 PM
You have helped celebrate the holiday in such a delightful way, Ilene, with this creative moving poem! Lovely! : )
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Date: 9/12/2018 4:29:00 AM
It is often the smallest, shortest, most insignificant chalice or child who leads us to the most beautiful places. And a little child shall lead us....
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Date: 9/11/2018 5:34:00 PM
Well caught and scribed! Polynesians experience the same difficulty blowing Triton trumpets and conches! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/11/2018 5:23:00 PM
That was fun Ilene. I didn't know what a shofar was but figured it out before I got to the end of the poem. : )
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