The Slow Toothless Mole

In one labor of Star-nosed Moles
Traveled a slower toothless cow
The last in line, all that she sees
Is sore gums and molasses now!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Laurie Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 9:05 PM
G'day PAT … I suppose could go to McDonalds and be adored in a bread roll by every customer - thanks PAT - Lindsay
Adams Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 2:38 PM
Well... I guess Mole Bread Roll does kind of have a ring to it. But since it's just the rear end, I'm afraid it wouldn't taste real great!.............80)
Allison Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 4:47 PM
your imaginative poems do make me smile Pat!:-) hugs jan xx
Adams Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 2:36 PM
Thanks Jan. Molasses is a word begging to be played with I think! Thanks for commenting!......pat
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