The Slipper

The Slipper

She lost a one blue slipper
oh One ,goodness sake
'it can't have gone to far'
but cold foot did it make !

A week then comes and goes
no slipper to be seen
so nothing else to sort it
'it's lost' ...well l mean !

Yes , nothing else for it
today off to the shops
bright red ones to stand out
now THAT one to is lost !!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/14/2024 4:36:00 PM
wow that’s amazing thank you for sharing this is really creative and profound.
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 12/15/2024 2:17:00 AM
Thank you for such a kind reply. Have a great day. J.
Date: 12/11/2024 10:37:00 AM
A surprising finale ~ what a great sense of humour you have. Typo "too is lost" - needs doubles o's.
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 12/12/2024 3:36:00 AM
my grammar is terrible lol. l used to be really good in english lessons & can you believe l actually got high grades. But l ended up with severe ME at aged 23 and it scrambled my brain. Im now struggling to even write and havent written a poem for a few years :( but will try as soon as l have a good day.Till then l can stlll enjoy others works so keep writing as l love to read your poems. take care. Jx
Date: 3/9/2020 3:27:00 AM
Wonderful idea...excellent presentation too...
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 3/9/2020 5:52:00 AM
lol, l still haven't found that lost slipper..now lv got another story of mystery slippers to tell from long ago..l must finish it today..take care .J x
Date: 3/8/2020 1:50:00 PM
what a charming tale Jsckie - it's a mystery where these things disappear to. I lost my hat between getting off the bus and going to the funeral have got to call the bus depot and church to see if it can be located:-( hugs Jan xx
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 3/8/2020 3:20:00 PM
My feet were so cold l resorted to wearing the two odd slippers lol till found the red slipper yesterday from the new pr l had to buy. We still haven't found the first one lost..we have searched high and low..mystery indeed. J x
Date: 3/7/2020 10:13:00 AM
Charming, Jackie.
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 3/8/2020 5:39:00 AM
Thank you for kind comment.Jx
Date: 3/4/2020 12:22:00 PM
Clever rhyme Jackie, I enjoyed the epic tragedy of it all, thanks...
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 3/7/2020 9:16:00 AM
thank you Charlie for kind comment on my little poem. l must be having a 'slipper' poem inspiration moment as working on another lol. all the best, Jackie .
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