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The Slipper

The Slipper She lost a one blue slipper oh One ,goodness sake 'it can't have gone to far' but cold foot did it make ! A week then comes and goes no slipper to be seen so nothing else to sort it 'it's lost' ...well l mean ! Yes , nothing else for it today off to the shops bright red ones to stand out now THAT one to is lost !!!

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Syretta Giusto

Date: 12/14/2024 4:36:00 PM

wow that’s amazing thank you for sharing this is really creative and profound.

Jacqueline Elston
Date: 12/15/2024 2:17:00 AM

Thank you for such a kind reply. Have a great day. J.

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/11/2024 10:37:00 AM

A surprising finale ~ what a great sense of humour you have. Typo "too is lost" - needs doubles o's.

Jacqueline Elston
Date: 12/12/2024 3:36:00 AM

my grammar is terrible lol. l used to be really good in english lessons & can you believe l actually got high grades. But l ended up with severe ME at aged 23 and it scrambled my brain. Im now struggling to even write and havent written a poem for a few years :( but will try as soon as l have a good day.Till then l can stlll enjoy others works so keep writing as l love to read your poems. take care. Jx

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/9/2020 3:27:00 AM

Wonderful idea...excellent presentation too...

Jacqueline Elston
Date: 3/9/2020 5:52:00 AM

lol, l still haven't found that lost slipper..now lv got another story of mystery slippers to tell from long ago..l must finish it today..take care .J x

Jan Allison

Date: 3/8/2020 1:50:00 PM

what a charming tale Jsckie - it's a mystery where these things disappear to. I lost my hat between getting off the bus and going to the funeral have got to call the bus depot and church to see if it can be located:-( hugs Jan xx

Jacqueline Elston
Date: 3/8/2020 3:20:00 PM

My feet were so cold l resorted to wearing the two odd slippers lol till found the red slipper yesterday from the new pr l had to buy. We still haven't found the first one lost..we have searched high and low..mystery indeed. J x

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/7/2020 10:13:00 AM

Charming, Jackie.

Jacqueline Elston
Date: 3/8/2020 5:39:00 AM

Thank you for kind comment.Jx

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/4/2020 12:22:00 PM

Clever rhyme Jackie, I enjoyed the epic tragedy of it all, thanks...

Jacqueline Elston
Date: 3/7/2020 9:16:00 AM

thank you Charlie for kind comment on my little poem. l must be having a 'slipper' poem inspiration moment as working on another lol. all the best, Jackie .