The Sleuth of Soup Creek

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With a fresh cup of coffee, I stepped outside to have a peek.
It was another peaceful morning, in the valley around Soup Creek.
I caught the glint of a Winchester, a model ninety-four.
It was across the lap of Jenna, just outside the saloon door.

From the corner of my eye, I saw Jan sneaking to the loo.
I could hear her spurs were jingling as she went to take a poo.
In the saloon I heard some laughter, it was Milt just having fun.
At a table dealing stud, a gamblers game is never done.

At the other end of the street, there stood Tania with watchful eyes.
With a pistol on each hip, she was ready for any surprise.
Down by the livery stable was a Texas ranger by the name of Dave.
He was looking for our mayor, who he thought was digging a grave.

There was a rumor of riders coming, and the Creek might be in a bind.
He searched both high and low, but sir Tom he could not find.
Ten miles south of town, with graves dug all around.
Tom had stopped these riders and saved our hallowed ground.

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Date: 9/10/2022 2:50:00 PM
This made me laugh, I love this! Great one Mark, you really brought this poem to life, I could just see it! :D <3
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Date: 9/1/2022 7:10:00 PM
LOL wasn't sure what to expect here, amazing , witty poem!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 9/2/2022 4:01:00 PM
It’s a spin off from Tom Cunningham’s original one. Thanks Art!!
Date: 8/30/2022 7:50:00 PM
Keep it going Mark love your rendition. A fav...
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Mark Koplin
Date: 9/2/2022 4:00:00 PM
Thanks Deputy!
Date: 8/21/2022 7:26:00 PM
Yea! Mark. This is a superb little look at our town and those who are doing everything they can to keep the peace. Undertaker Tom must have been laying for these hombres. Saved us some bullets! Thanks for the mention, my friend. Definitely a FAVE for me!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/22/2022 3:16:00 PM
You guys have a problem with a lady sittin' at your poker table?
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/22/2022 9:54:00 AM
Bring some hard cash with you.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/22/2022 8:28:00 AM
Thank you sir! I’ll see you at the tables
Date: 8/21/2022 6:32:00 PM
I'm still laughing, this is brilliant Mark, I'd best come clean. I was down by the river when I noticed six mean looking desparados, they stopped and made camp and then I crept closer and overhead them making plans to rob the Cattlemens Bank in Soup Creek. I waited until they slept and walked in gun in hand, they woke and they went for theirs and I was forced to defend myself and that's the truth. A business opportunity presented itself to me and I took advantage of it. The hard earned money of the townsfolk is now safe as are the townsfolk. Good luck in the contest Sheriff.. Mayor Tom.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/22/2022 3:16:00 PM
Hi Tom. The way I see it, you were only doing your job... both of them! lol I'm glad you stopped by to read this one.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/22/2022 8:27:00 AM
Your secret is safe with us Mr Mayor!! Lol, thanks Tom I’m you like it.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/22/2022 12:31:00 AM
A lot of rumours flying around David, don't listen to gossip lol
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/21/2022 7:18:00 PM
Any truth you struck a Gusher whilst digging their graves, or was that just marmite on your shovels, the plot thickens Tom
Date: 8/21/2022 3:58:00 PM
Mark, ha ha, love it, thank you for including me in your poem, best of luck in the contest, a fave for me!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/21/2022 4:07:00 PM
Thanks Tania!! I hope you don’t mind. I appreciate the fave!
Date: 8/21/2022 2:25:00 PM
Eyes all round Mark, the creek is a peaceful town, but always ready for some action, great to see you keeping the story going, good lighthearted fun, and a very enjoyable poem, with a mystery? all the best for contest cheers David
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/21/2022 3:53:00 PM
It's an awesome story, Mr. Cunningham is an inspiration to us all. Be well my friend!
Date: 8/21/2022 1:23:00 PM
This is so very funny, Mark. With a sheriff like you and a sleuth of a mayor like Tom, Soup Creek is safe from criminals and mean ol' boys. I love this write! Faved.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/21/2022 3:54:00 PM
Now you're gettin it, lol
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/21/2022 1:46:00 PM
I am left wondering though, if Mayor Tom told em to skidaddle, or if he filled those graves that day. Hmmm I guess you're not tellin.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/21/2022 1:31:00 PM
Thanks Jenna! I appreciate that very much. There's a new mayor in town.
Date: 8/21/2022 12:35:00 PM
Hello Mark Koplin, I like the way you put this poem together. It will be my fav. Enjoy your day my friend. I enjoyed my time at Soup Creek.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/22/2022 10:35:00 AM
Hello Mark Koplin, I enjoyed this poem very much. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/21/2022 1:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Darlene. I'm glad you liked it.
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