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The Sleeping Conscious

Awake and beating to the sound of the sky, Through smoke the light rises, Out and in the sound of vibrations, Watching and listening from low, from high. The darkness resonates around: It follows and curves between and in, It waits to see to start to begin. Yet they are not in tune to the sound. Now you see that it has gone, A time when all but one gets old; Found then lost, the hearts will fold, But now with you all is won. The light drowns out all else but me, The swirls dart and shadows flee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/27/2014 7:19:00 AM
Great write - well done!
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Date: 5/25/2014 5:58:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Molly. I enjoyed this first well crafted poem you have posted. I believe you will find much support here. Keep writing; comment on the poems of other writers and most of them will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Molly Ross
Date: 5/30/2014 11:31:00 AM
Thank you, I never thought people would take any notice of my poems, so it's so encouraging and warming to know they've been read, let alone appreciated
Date: 5/24/2014 2:36:00 AM
Molly what a beautiful smooth read, I am quite new to PS so I will say welcome and thank you for sharing. Take care..........Vera...............
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Molly Ross
Date: 5/30/2014 11:30:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vera. Nice to meet you
Date: 5/23/2014 9:29:00 PM
Molly, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Molly Ross
Date: 5/30/2014 11:29:00 AM
Thank you ever so much! I'm pretty new to this. I'm only 18, and thought I'd just have a bit of fun sharing my poems. With rather tedious amounts of school work I've fallen out of my habit of creative writing, but this really is the perfect way to rediscover it. Nice to meet you
Date: 5/23/2014 5:44:00 PM
Hi Molly,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/23/2014 2:57:00 PM
a very nice poem. I like the '' But now with you all is won''. welcome to poetrysoup. I am looking forward to your other poems. Thanks for sharing
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Molly Ross
Date: 5/30/2014 11:31:00 AM
That means so much, thanks ever so!
Date: 5/23/2014 1:43:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Molly :) - I choose your first great written sonnet poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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