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The Sleeping Addict

The sleeping addict What sounds do I hear? Snores a far... Snores a near... Deep fast breaths wheezing A choke, a cough or too It sometimes sounds like they are just coming too I know it's just sleep, But what really is that? A moment of solace to get Their wits back? Now all is quiet, is peaceful at last But I guess not for long, only a moment has passed I don't want to move, Or barely breathe It might wake them up Make me a thief A robber of their slumber Their zen There closed eyes They must stay under to sort out their lives What are they dreaming? Who do they hear? Me being a thief, of their dreams or their fears I would like to sleep But I would rather hear The sleeping addict With nothing to fear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/28/2010 8:54:00 PM
This was very good. The last stanza made me smile. I prefer sleep! Sounds like someone has a case of sleep apnea! I loved the flow and rhymes, this was an excellent poem!
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