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The Slap

There should be clearer signs, as a relationship starts to break up - the hiss of steam, a twist of smoke perhaps or debris distributed across a hot, cloudless, summer evening sky. That way, the force of recognition wouldn’t be so much of a slap.

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Date: 10/11/2021 7:31:00 PM
My sentiments entirely! Beautifully done. - Nick
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Date: 10/12/2021 2:25:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 7/11/2021 5:20:00 PM
Love your poem. A wonderful write. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Anais Vionet
Date: 7/11/2021 6:16:00 PM
Thank you =]

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