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The Sky Unites

Enjoying the stars I like the light of the moon The sun brings about the warmth The sky unites them Then add the clouds in the mix So the sky looks worldly good
Russell Sivey Entrant in Brian Strand's "Two To Twelve" contest 1/25/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/26/2012 9:22:00 AM
I believe these kinds of poems are the ones Brian likes for his contests. This is a decently written sedoka.
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Date: 1/25/2012 11:06:00 PM
Very nice Russell-i Love looking at clouds and sky and moon and stars can never tire of such.
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