Russell Sivey Poet Sedoka

The Sky Unites

Enjoying the stars
I like the light of the moon
The sun brings about the warmth
The sky unites them
Then add the clouds in the mix
So the sky looks worldly good

Russell Sivey 

Entrant in Brian Strand's "Two To Twelve" contest

1/25/2012

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Robert Pettit January 26, 2012 at 9:22 AM I believe these kinds of poems are the ones Brian likes for his contests. This is a decently written sedoka.

Brenda Victoria Northeast January 25, 2012 at 11:06 PM Very nice Russell-i Love looking at clouds and sky and moon and stars can never tire of such.