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and post notes and photos about your poem like Beverly Read.
Constructive criticism is welcome if you have some, but I hope you like it I was thinking of Chicken Little when I wrote this - the movie where a piece of the sky falls. Then I thought, "what would I do?" Try to put it back, of course. But since it is a children's movie, and children are not usually tall enough to do anything, like drive or ride things at Disneyland, the rest of it came.