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The Sky and Ocean

~"Nature comes to life" contest~ the sky of grey shines ocean like without the flow both with mystery the water crashes drops of rain meet at the shore all becoming one

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2011 6:58:00 PM

Hello, Michael how are you.. well i stopped by the soup yesterday.. only to comment on carries blog.. And here i am today.. placing my very first comment in months.. i think.. its been a long time..lol.. but i have to start with my favorite poets.. and by the way.. i choose this one.. because i love mystery.. and the sky touching the ocean.. at the end... becomes one.. enjoyed,..p.d.

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/3/2011 2:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your beautiful Haiku, Michael. Love the imagery. Love, Annalise

Date: 3/1/2011 1:14:00 PM

Great pictures painted in these lovely haiku's enjoyed and thanks for your comments. Alexa

Kash Poet

Date: 3/1/2011 7:02:00 AM

Amazing images you have painted here Michael!Congrats on your well deserved win in the contest----kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2011 8:50:00 PM

Congratulations ,Michael. It's nice to see this one again and I hope to see your rhyming one for the next contest. wish I had time to stay here longer tonight and check out new poems, but looks like seeing the winners is of THIS contest is about all I'll have time for.

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/28/2011 8:28:00 PM

beautiful haikus Michael congrats on your win in the contest

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/28/2011 1:09:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of carol, Michael

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 10:34:00 AM

Hello Michael, This is a beautiful Haiku, congratulations on your win in the contest As Always, Shar

John Freeman

Date: 2/28/2011 10:23:00 AM

Beautiful job Michael! It's so great to see you in the top three. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored third place victory in Carol's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2011 7:28:00 AM

Kudos and congrats to my White Knight for your third place win in Carol's contest with this elegant entry so full of great imagery and warm lines.. again happy to be sharing the winners podium with one of the very best poets.. your Jersey Girl forever and always with luv..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/28/2011 7:10:00 AM

Beautiful Micheal.Many congratulations for this win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Michael. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 2/26/2011 10:01:00 AM

Painted by perfect words Michael, impressive write my friend. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Kash Poet

Date: 2/25/2011 7:53:00 PM

Wonderful imagery !Goodluck Michael in the contest of Carol---kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/25/2011 2:26:00 PM

oh that mystery intrigues me too Michael.. awesome and elegant lines for your contest entry.. good luck my White Knight.. am so waiting to enjoy the sky and ocean luv.. happy weekend from your Jersey Girl forever and always..with luv..

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 2/25/2011 12:59:00 PM

Michael - Cloud water and Ocean water merge at shore. Mystery submerged. Vow !!!!. Thnx for comments on my poem "Queen of Hearts". Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2011 10:59:00 AM

I love how you put together these two things, the grandest in size and majesty of our mother earth! Keep that muse shining, Michael.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/25/2011 8:59:00 AM

wonderful, colorful duet of 'kus , michael.. love the last line..just finished mine as well... winning streaks in the contest! :) huggs, nette

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/25/2011 8:48:00 AM

This double helping of haiku looks like a good entry for the contest. Both are quite descriptive.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/25/2011 7:49:00 AM

Beautiful visuals of of the sky and ocean with apt images, Michael

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/25/2011 7:08:00 AM

Love the summation of the second stanza...all becoming one! Brilliant!! Good luck, Michael !

Daver Austin

Date: 2/25/2011 6:07:00 AM

Like them both, Mike. Yes, mystery, what one seldom thinks about because of the business of living. daver

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/25/2011 5:35:00 AM

Quite a stunning piece you have here Michael, could visualise every line.. Hope Carol will love it just as much.. How you doing btw? Luv W