Michael J. Falotico Poet Haiku

The Sky and Ocean

~"Nature comes to life" contest~



                                            the sky of grey shines
                                         ocean like without the flow
                                               both with mystery
                        
                                               the water crashes 
                                       drops of rain meet at the shore
                                                all becoming one

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Poet Destroyer A March 12, 2011 at 6:58 PM Hello, Michael how are you.. well i stopped by the soup yesterday.. only to comment on carries blog.. And here i am today.. placing my very first comment in months.. i think.. its been a long time..lol.. but i have to start with my favorite poets.. and by the way.. i choose this one.. because i love mystery.. and the sky touching the ocean.. at the end... becomes one.. enjoyed,..p.d.

Audrey Haick March 3, 2011 at 2:19 PM Congratulations on your beautiful Haiku, Michael. Love the imagery. Love, Annalise

March 1, 2011 at 1:14 PM Great pictures painted in these lovely haiku's enjoyed and thanks for your comments. Alexa

Kash Poet March 1, 2011 at 7:02 AM Amazing images you have painted here Michael!Congrats on your well deserved win in the contest----kashinath

Andrea Dietrich February 28, 2011 at 8:50 PM Congratulations ,Michael. It's nice to see this one again and I hope to see your rhyming one for the next contest. wish I had time to stay here longer tonight and check out new poems, but looks like seeing the winners is of THIS contest is about all I'll have time for.

Francine Roberts February 28, 2011 at 8:28 PM beautiful haikus Michael congrats on your win in the contest

Dr.Ram Mehta February 28, 2011 at 1:09 PM Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of carol, Michael

Sharon Ruebel February 28, 2011 at 10:34 AM Hello Michael, This is a beautiful Haiku, congratulations on your win in the contest As Always, Shar

John Freeman February 28, 2011 at 10:23 AM Beautiful job Michael! It's so great to see you in the top three. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored third place victory in Carol's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 28, 2011 at 7:28 AM Kudos and congrats to my White Knight for your third place win in Carol's contest with this elegant entry so full of great imagery and warm lines.. again happy to be sharing the winners podium with one of the very best poets.. your Jersey Girl forever and always with luv..

Tahera Mannan February 28, 2011 at 7:10 AM Beautiful Micheal.Many congratulations for this win.

Carol Sunshine Brown February 28, 2011 at 6:17 AM Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Michael. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol

James Fraser February 26, 2011 at 10:01 AM Painted by perfect words Michael, impressive write my friend. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Kash Poet February 25, 2011 at 7:53 PM Wonderful imagery !Goodluck Michael in the contest of Carol---kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 25, 2011 at 2:26 PM oh that mystery intrigues me too Michael.. awesome and elegant lines for your contest entry.. good luck my White Knight.. am so waiting to enjoy the sky and ocean luv.. happy weekend from your Jersey Girl forever and always..with luv..

Dr Hitendra Mehta February 25, 2011 at 12:59 PM Michael - Cloud water and Ocean water merge at shore. Mystery submerged. Vow !!!!. Thnx for comments on my poem "Queen of Hearts". Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Andrea Dietrich February 25, 2011 at 10:59 AM I love how you put together these two things, the grandest in size and majesty of our mother earth! Keep that muse shining, Michael.

Nette Onclaud February 25, 2011 at 8:59 AM wonderful, colorful duet of 'kus , michael.. love the last line..just finished mine as well... winning streaks in the contest! :) huggs, nette

Robert Pettit February 25, 2011 at 8:48 AM This double helping of haiku looks like a good entry for the contest. Both are quite descriptive.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 25, 2011 at 7:49 AM Beautiful visuals of of the sky and ocean with apt images, Michael

Carrie Richards February 25, 2011 at 7:08 AM Love the summation of the second stanza...all becoming one! Brilliant!! Good luck, Michael !

Daver Austin February 25, 2011 at 6:07 AM Like them both, Mike. Yes, mystery, what one seldom thinks about because of the business of living. daver

Wilma Neels February 25, 2011 at 5:35 AM Quite a stunning piece you have here Michael, could visualise every line.. Hope Carol will love it just as much.. How you doing btw? Luv W