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The Size of a Moan

aah… you say a tensed note almost unheard but in that one moan time comes to a standstill for rapture forgets the past needs no future to give it hope it simply is, expands, fills, abducts takes us to an edgeless place and beyond

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/16/2018 8:38:00 PM

How beautifully breathtaking your poetry is, Bernard. I love every line of your exquisite poem that builds wondrously to a consummate last line, topped off with a brilliant title as well. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Bernard Chan
Date: 10/16/2018 11:50:00 PM

Thank you, Susan! Your comments are always so generous. Truly appreciated, as always :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/16/2018 7:00:00 AM

wow! and I thought "and the earth moved" was good. This is much better.

Bernard Chan
Date: 10/16/2018 5:47:00 PM

I like "and the earth moved" too :)) Thanks a lot, Caren.