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The Size Of A Moan


aah…
you say
a tensed note  
almost unheard
but in that one moan
time comes to a standstill
for rapture forgets the past
needs no future to give it hope
it simply is, expands, fills, abducts
takes us to an edgeless place and beyond

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/16/2018 8:38:00 PM
How beautifully breathtaking your poetry is, Bernard. I love every line of your exquisite poem that builds wondrously to a consummate last line, topped off with a brilliant title as well. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Bernard Chan
Date: 10/16/2018 11:50:00 PM
Thank you, Susan! Your comments are always so generous. Truly appreciated, as always :)
Date: 10/16/2018 7:00:00 AM
wow! and I thought "and the earth moved" was good. This is much better.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 10/16/2018 5:47:00 PM
I like "and the earth moved" too :)) Thanks a lot, Caren.