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The Sinner's Freedom

Tomorrow, I will thank the ones who sin - Though they, against the gods, do tend to pray - For driving away all the peaceful kin Who sit in vanity to this sad day; For now, I am the one who does decide The way I wish to live this life I own. No longer will I only live inside To wish the rules did not leave me alone. It now will be easy to go and find The one who will complete me mentally; For oft I hate my company confined To dreams of what true love could hold for me. So if you are a woman recent free, Come forth and give your truest love to me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/22/2009 3:26:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes and much success in your writing endeavors. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your remarkable poetry being featured this week Jessica. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week, Merry Christmas to you >> James
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:06:00 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week!! Very well deserved. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/21/2009 5:36:00 AM
A very brave poem with honest proclamations of self liberation. Congratulations on it being featured.
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