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The sinking ship

Thus, came to an end,
both the depth of my breath,
and our happy sail,
on the waves of the pacific.

The iceberg pierced the giant,
sucked us,
of our joy and dreams,
families deserted and orphans born.

To those chilling waves,
we froze,
with jaws wide apart,
and our teeth went crystal.

Our tears went unnoticed,
superior were those,
icy beams of the pacific,
that froze our tears half way down.

we floated for hours,
on those old dusty structures of wood,
they could bear not more than one,
relations along with dreams, we had to sacrifice.

thus froze my body in the icy arms,
my pulse stampeded,
and hopes shattered
so speaks my soul from the distant skies. #PSM

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/19/2015 7:46:00 PM
Hi Mahesh, the flow and imagery are amazing. :) WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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MAHESH PETHAKAMSETTY
Date: 9/20/2015 7:05:00 AM
Thank you for your love and support. Am blessed to make friends in the poetic world...Regards #PSM
Date: 9/15/2015 3:29:00 PM
Hey Mahesh, a warm and hearty welcome to Poetry Soup! This is a deep and frightening story of loss, fear and tragedy. Excellent in form and imagery. I do look forward to enjoying more of your poems. Well done! Be Blessed, Neva
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MAHESH PETHAKAMSETTY
Date: 9/16/2015 7:26:00 AM
thank you very much. So nice of you to greet me and help me start my journey in a positive boosting manner. I expect the same love, encouragement and support all along my journey. Regards #PSM
Date: 9/15/2015 1:35:00 PM
Mahesh, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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MAHESH PETHAKAMSETTY
Date: 9/15/2015 2:49:00 PM
I had a peep into your profile mam..woah..you are amazing. My eyes were in a stun for a minute or two. Getting associated with you, is indeed my pleasure. I need your best wishes
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MAHESH PETHAKAMSETTY
Date: 9/15/2015 2:36:00 PM
Hello SKAT mam.. so nice of you to take pain to encourage new enterents like me. Your words were really boosting, And am delighted to have a friend like you. I love poetry, and i came to knoW this site days back. Being a senior to me, I seek your help and advice in all ways possible. Thank you again for your concern. Lets be friends.. :)
Date: 9/15/2015 6:07:00 AM
Woah Mahesh yaar, bohat aacha :)
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MAHESH PETHAKAMSETTY
Date: 9/15/2015 9:35:00 AM
Thank you so much...This is my first comment...it really means a lot...:)