The Single Coin

In time, there was always the people, 
That worked so hard to do what they wanted. 
With a single coin, they had to support their families, 
While the rich above them show off, and they are taunted. 

With labor, we poor have to serve the rich, 
And they all laugh, smoking a huge cigar. 
But what if they were treated as we were, and the tables turned, 
Revealing that an uprising isn’t very far?

With a single coin, we try our best to do everything in the world. 
We people that get up and walk to the future,
Keep the wheel of the world spinning and turning. 
Everything in this world should be equal, every creature. 

Even without that single coin, we are still capable of more, 
It’s just our choice of what we do next in the thing everyone strives
For, and if we stop walking, we’re nothing more than scum. 
Let’s get up and live better lives. 

With the single coin we have, a future shines on it’s smooth surface,
And we can cross it’s ridges like a mountain that stands in our way. 
Even without help, we can move forward and do something more,
Then hopefully we can keep this world alive and stay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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September 2, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Chioru, thanks for the reply... Doitashimashite :) <-- right back at ya... PD
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August 15, 2014 at 9:20 PM
Chioru, thank you for the reply...LINDA
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August 15, 2014 at 10:25 PM
Of course. Doitashimashite :)
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August 14, 2014 at 10:33 PM
Chioru, stopping by to read and enjoy your poem once again. :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA
Carris Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 11:41 AM
Thank you so much. I'm glad everyone enjoys this poem. :)
A   Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 12:40 AM
Ha, thanks for the ---Arigato
Carris Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 11:46 AM
Of course. I'm Japanese, but I'm learning English from a friend, so poetry is a way for me to express myself and test my English.
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August 13, 2014 at 12:15 AM
Choni,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Carris Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 12:21 AM
Arigato
Austin Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 10:28 AM
Yes, the single coin is hope. Some haven't even a single coin. Congrats on the selection. daver
Carris Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 8:36 PM
Thank you
Philibert Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 9:39 AM
good rhymes here, nice stanzaic balance
Eastman Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 12:17 PM
A true commentary on this world. Well written, too. Welcome to PoetrySoup. If you click on a name or avatar... You will be taken to their poetry. If you leave a comment, then they will have a permanent link back to your poetry.
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August 8, 2014 at 2:27 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Chioru - I choose your first great written free verse - I hope the same :) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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