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The Silent Village

The Silent Village In a silent, cool and quiet village I used to stay Life was sweet, enjoyable and never in a hurry Taking animals to graze, playing with other kids and swimming daily Walking by clean and silent rivers where water was flowing freely But if one doesn’t complete duties and chores, parents punished us dearly Those days, life in that village was not only good, but also enjoyable Schools were miles away, but we were never late We wore no shoes, blazers and modern bags, but we looked great In that village the dress code was simple but everybody was neat Mothers bought cheap “mtumba” clothes in the nearest market Men going to hunt and slaughter animals to balance the diet Shopping list was a self-composed song to the shop when a child was sent Those days life in that village was not only good, but also enjoyable Everything was communal and batter trade was the affair Cases of incitement, corruption and theft were not there Discipline and correction of children was a community affair To correct and punish any wrong child, every parent could dare Scent of traditional food, honey and wild fruits used to fill the air Those days life in that village was not only good, but also enjoyable Sadly I sit today, I watch the world escalating Skyscrapers mushrooming where the silent village used to be lying Digital marketing replacing the sweet batter trading Gated communities, where children do not know those neighboring Good morals and behaviors in young ones diminishing Pollution everywhere and Mother Nature wailing Those days life in that village was not only good, but also enjoyable (By Waweru Ngugi)

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Date: 2/2/2016 3:12:00 PM
Many congrats Waweru on your win - i think many of hanker back to our childhood days when life was so much simpler:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/2/2016 7:38:00 AM
Greetings Waweru. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/1/2016 7:24:00 PM
The saddest story of all who have rural backgrounds! Congrats on your well deserved placement, Waweru!
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Date: 2/1/2016 4:10:00 PM
Hello Waweru, lovely win. LINDA
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Date: 2/1/2016 3:22:00 PM
Waweru,, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 2/1/2016 2:00:00 AM
Congratulations on placing in this contest with such interesting memories!
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Waweru Ngugi
Date: 2/1/2016 2:26:00 AM
thank you
Date: 2/1/2016 1:49:00 AM
Congrats on the HM in Viv's contest. We are not ready for the technology we have.
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Date: 1/12/2016 5:58:00 AM
Work well done . the poem is great!!!
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Waweru Ngugi
Date: 1/12/2016 6:42:00 AM
Thanks Guys,Your comments are my encouragements
Date: 1/12/2016 4:57:00 AM
Nice African read. Keep writing.
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Waweru Ngugi
Date: 1/12/2016 5:28:00 AM
thanks Gilbert
Date: 1/5/2016 11:05:00 AM
Waweru, and 11++++. Your writes really have me wanting to read some more. Excellent!
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Waweru Ngugi
Date: 1/6/2016 12:28:00 AM
Thanks a lot eve
Date: 12/31/2015 12:19:00 AM
Waweru, Congratulations on making "The Best New Poets list." Happy for you. Great way to start the new year. Happy New Year. Hugs **SKAT**
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Waweru Ngugi
Date: 12/31/2015 12:40:00 AM
Thanks am humbled
Date: 12/29/2015 7:25:00 PM
i like it ngugi
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Waweru Ngugi
Date: 12/29/2015 11:48:00 PM
Thanks a lot
Date: 12/29/2015 2:04:00 PM
you make poetry my favorite thing to read
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Waweru Ngugi
Date: 12/29/2015 2:20:00 PM
thanks alot, your positive comments gives me energy to do more

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