The Silent Village

 The Silent Village 
             In a silent, cool and quiet village I used to stay
             Life was sweet, enjoyable and never in a hurry
             Taking animals to graze, playing with other kids and swimming daily
             Walking by clean and silent rivers where water was flowing freely
             But if one doesn’t complete duties and chores, parents punished us dearly
             Those days, life in that village was not only good, but also enjoyable

            Schools were miles away, but we were never late
            We wore no shoes, blazers and modern bags, but we looked great
            In that village the dress code was simple but everybody was neat
            Mothers bought cheap “mtumba” clothes in the nearest market
            Men going to hunt and slaughter animals to balance the diet
            Shopping list was a self-composed song to the shop when a child was sent
            Those days life in that village was not only good, but also enjoyable

            Everything was communal and batter trade was the affair
            Cases of incitement, corruption and theft were not there
            Discipline and correction of children was a community affair
            To correct and punish any wrong child, every parent could dare
            Scent of traditional food, honey and wild fruits used to fill the air
            Those days life in that village was not only good, but also enjoyable

            Sadly I sit today, I watch the world escalating
            Skyscrapers mushrooming where the silent village used to be lying
            Digital marketing replacing the sweet batter trading
            Gated communities, where children do not know those neighboring
            Good morals and behaviors in young ones diminishing
            Pollution everywhere and Mother Nature wailing
            Those days life in that village was not only good, but also enjoyable

                                  (By Waweru Ngugi)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Many congrats Waweru on your win - i think many of hanker back to our childhood days when life was so much simpler:-) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 7:38 AM
Greetings Waweru. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Cheema Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:24 PM
The saddest story of all who have rural backgrounds! Congrats on your well deserved placement, Waweru!
A   Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 4:10 PM
Hello Waweru, lovely win. LINDA
A  Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Waweru,, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Gentry Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Congratulations on placing in this contest with such interesting memories!
Ngugi Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 2:26 AM
thank you
Carmack Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 1:49 AM
Congrats on the HM in Viv's contest. We are not ready for the technology we have.
Njora Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 5:58 AM
Work well done . the poem is great!!!
Ngugi Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 6:42 AM
Thanks Guys,Your comments are my encouragements
Kichoi Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 4:57 AM
Nice African read. Keep writing.
Ngugi Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 5:28 AM
thanks Gilbert
Roper Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 11:05 AM
Waweru, and 11++++. Your writes really have me wanting to read some more. Excellent!
Ngugi Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:28 AM
Thanks a lot eve
A  Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 12:19 AM
Waweru, Congratulations on making "The Best New Poets list." Happy for you. Great way to start the new year. Happy New Year. Hugs **SKAT**
Ngugi Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 12:40 AM
Thanks am humbled
Osho Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 7:25 PM
i like it ngugi
Ngugi Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 11:48 PM
Thanks a lot
Nyaboke Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 2:04 PM
you make poetry my favorite thing to read
Ngugi Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 2:20 PM
thanks alot, your positive comments gives me energy to do more
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