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Hard is the rock, yet it does roll, beneath the oceans Swift currents its rough edges become smooth, rounded But it makes no sound; it is the silence of stone. Gray is granite, as markers grave marker, yet in times Harshness the names that speak for a life lost, is vanquished Do to erosion and the elemental tides of nature, thus is the Silence of stone reinforced. Cast down are the mountains of greatest beauty, due to The ravishing of time, natural monuments reaching upwards Unto the very heavens themselves, yet these are divine alpines, Remain left in the shadow of the silence of stone, unable to speak. Burn does not the eternal soul of our world, a cores heart of flame, Heating our inner desire to thrive and survive as a species, but if it’s Fiery furnish pilot light flickered out, turning our planet inside and out. Would we be able to cry out for helps support, nay behold the true silence Of stone. Ideal statues of forbidden deities, stand covered beneath the Rain forest canopies of the past, nay forgotten by their idol Worshipers, vanquished, crippled they do crumble to the ground, Banished Gods, in the silence of stone. Grinding, cutting humanity tries in vain to leave its eternal Mark, for generations in the future to know that we existed, Carving epic figures amongst the rocky tops most high, But we are the dinosaurs of our own mortality, And in this venue, behold the stone remains Silent not revealing our existence. As the thundering asteroid giants of heaven, cascade Ever closer to us from above, the world still casts Rocks of ignorance against their kindred brethren, Denying that the collision is due to happen no Matter what. But stone never shatters, it’s solid, And it weighs heavy on the intellectual mind, But stone ears remain dual of sound, again The silence is deafening. Hard is the rock, yet it does roll, beneath the oceans Swift currents its rough edges become smooth, rounded But it makes no sound; it is the silence of stone. BY: CHERYL ANNA DUNN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/4/2015 8:31:00 AM
powerful piece of writing cherl excellent pen dear pal
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Date: 1/31/2015 3:59:00 AM
A rock for every season inside. Cheryl, I love epic carvings. Another wonderful write... LINDA
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Date: 1/29/2015 8:42:00 PM
A very philosophic poem! I am in awe of this treasure... "As the thundering asteroid giants of heaven, cascade Ever closer to us from above, the world still casts Rocks of ignorance against their kindred brethren, Denying that the collision is due to happen no Matter what." Wow- I'm amazed. Always, Laura
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Date: 1/29/2015 6:34:00 AM
'But we are the dinosaurs of our own mortality' - WOW...
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Date: 1/28/2015 3:48:00 PM
Oh boy, have you got your finger on the pulse of humanity. Yes indeed, we try, sometimes with great resolve to leave our mark in order to say to those in the future will see and observe or stone monuments. Poets try to live forever with their poetry. I have been puzzling for sometime now on a stone monument called the Georgia Guidestones . . .
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Date: 1/28/2015 5:09:00 AM
- Your poem is "solid as stone", dear Cherl - Your words gives powerful sound !!! - A very skilled work in this poem .... (as always) - I wish you a lovely day my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/27/2015 10:15:00 PM
There are so many layers to your poetry style. It's very inspiring. :)
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Date: 1/27/2015 12:57:00 PM
I marvel at your poetic powers, Cherl! I would never even dare try to imitate your style! This is another example of your creativity, where imagery plays a leading role. The final repetition of the first three lines is very effective, but then, so is the whole content! #7 // paul
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Date: 1/26/2015 11:42:00 PM
What a huge work. Absolutely amazing use of imagery. So much depth and power, "stone remains Silent not revealing our existence." Truely brilliant! An outstanding write. love Shane xxx
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Date: 1/26/2015 6:53:00 PM
You always have a style no one else compares-amazing-we are the dinosaurs of our own mortality, rocks of ignorance against their kindred brethren. You are such an amazing story teller!
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Date: 1/26/2015 6:30:00 PM
As always, an epic poem, Cheryl. I just love how you took that title and used it inside the poem, and concluded with that line as well! An epic topic!
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Date: 1/26/2015 5:56:00 PM
Very powerful imagery, I like the mood you have created with this piece. Bravo!
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