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The Signal and the Extra Mile

He awoke one day stoic and changed his legs somehow were rearranged yes, he felt he had been shortchanged legs of steel that ran fast so when they kidnapped his girlfriend his legs were a means to an end the Aliens then, were godsend although, he felt like an outcast part human part Alien young gun came from area fifty one he did escape but could not shun signals from Alien mast

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Date: 9/1/2023 3:02:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Charles' contest. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 8/30/2023 2:46:00 PM
A creative and entertaining take on the contest, Vie! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/29/2023 6:37:00 AM
"he did escape but could not shun" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/29/2023 5:52:00 AM
Very interesting write, Vie. But well done as usual :) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie
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Date: 8/8/2023 7:31:00 PM
Well writen but it could be about prosthetics. or aliens.
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Date: 8/9/2023 3:09:00 AM
There is a movie on T V called The Signal, and it is about the Aliens and what they did to humans, I got my inspiration from that, glad you enjoyed it,
Date: 8/8/2023 3:25:00 AM
- A lovely smile poem ... well done for the contest, good luck Vie Rose :) - hugs
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Date: 8/8/2023 3:06:00 PM
Thanks for dropping in Anne, glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 8/7/2023 2:44:00 PM
very original, and mysterious, enjoyed yann
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Date: 8/8/2023 3:06:00 PM
thanks for stopping by Yann :)
Date: 8/7/2023 10:18:00 AM
Lol:) Love it! Very original and entertaining.
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Date: 8/8/2023 3:06:00 PM
Thanks Joe for reading and commenting

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