The Signal and the Extra Mile

He awoke one day stoic and changed his legs somehow were rearranged yes, he felt he had been shortchanged legs of steel that ran fast so when they kidnapped his girlfriend his legs were a means to an end the Aliens then, were godsend although, he felt like an outcast part human part Alien young gun came from area fifty one he did escape but could not shun signals from Alien mast
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Kendrick Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 3:02 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Charles' contest. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Sara
Merryman Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 2:46 PM
A creative and entertaining take on the contest, Vie! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Alex Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:37 AM
"he did escape but could not shun" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Messina Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Very interesting write, Vie. But well done as usual :) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie
Situation Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 7:31 PM
Well writen but it could be about prosthetics. or aliens.
Rose  Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 3:09 AM
There is a movie on T V called The Signal, and it is about the Aliens and what they did to humans, I got my inspiration from that, glad you enjoyed it,
Andresen Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 3:25 AM
- A lovely smile poem ... well done for the contest, good luck Vie Rose :) - hugs
Rose  Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 3:06 PM
Thanks for dropping in Anne, glad you enjoyed it :)
Rolland Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 2:44 PM
very original, and mysterious, enjoyed yann
Rose  Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 3:06 PM
thanks for stopping by Yann :)
DiMino Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 10:18 AM
Lol:) Love it! Very original and entertaining.
Rose  Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 3:06 PM
Thanks Joe for reading and commenting
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