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In the below write the title reffers go Jesus's Comparing Solomans glory the that of other Created beauty, and is in no way aimed at myself.)

The sidelining of Solomon '

I observe the naked light un-folding' waking a day so bright, near broad seas
Rolling! In power rippling curling, 
then dissapating, a breeze 
arises carressing senses exciting.. The hills above show head and shouldered looming, i see lichen green on
Wayside bouldered, Burgundy 
roses around a cottage porch, such beauty all
Naked there is no garb needed; naught."as is the
Moonlight; when it arrives, shall be un-impeded, I see cowslips yellow, the irisis
Blue, the sky in its splendour, and un-matched hues, of all this the very same
Is true.' In their naked states that God created, does anything decribed need enhancing? I say if any so think? Well they
Need berrating, what am i recieving 
of deeper truths? Is God giving me
 insight naming world delete's who 
clothe war in piety, and sell greed..? As
 blest? who are of  those, who would 
destroy not deliver, and Gods Spirit test" 
Killers of all that is so great 
and good! The naked gift 
of ithe nnocent child' how deep lies your
Depravity? You by now;  thrice damned imbiciles.!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith nee Howarth Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 7:24 PM
Interesting exploration
Maverick Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 10:36 PM
Morning.' I mean evening lol))) thank you Alison i did this late yestrtday, and have just added some words i'd forgot to put in then.' Thank you for commenting.'
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