The Shuffle

A whittle of doubt
Pushes rain off the playground -
Gale wins the shuffle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 9:51 AM
So cute and creative, Jenish
Somadas Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 8:32 PM
Thank you Andrea..
George Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 8:17 PM
Wonderful haiku, so original and imaginative. It often happens. The winds drive away clouds and rain has to quit the playground. All the best, dear Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 9:46 PM
Thank you Valsa for your kind words..
Kendrick Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 5:33 PM
Whoa!! Glad I am not where a gale is happening. Children can be as bad as a gale on the playground though sometimes. Sara K
Somadas Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 9:46 PM
Very true—children can be quite a whirlwind at times!
Leiser Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 9:10 AM
So witty and creative, Jenish! Love your haiku! :)
Somadas Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 9:44 PM
Thank you Lara for your kind words..
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