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The Shower of Doubt

I opened my mind The water started running Thoughts were kind The effect was stunning

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/26/2016 5:38:00 PM
Hans Van Rostenberghe, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2016 2:59:00 PM
hope to see you back this year
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Date: 10/12/2015 2:52:00 PM
- Welcome as a new member at P-Soup - A great first poem from you :) - I wish you good luck and a lot of new "poet" friends, Hans :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/10/2015 6:46:00 PM
Hans, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/10/2015 11:15:00 AM
Hans Van R., Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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