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The Shower





There was a pretty girl called Charlene
Who showered all day to stay clean
The hot water ran out
She gave a loud shout
And started swearing like a marine

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Casarah Nance

Date: 7/28/2015 6:40:00 PM

Haha funny. Hope you are doing well my friend, :-)

Shane Cooper
Date: 7/28/2015 7:02:00 PM

Hi Cas, I am rolling along at a gentle pace, hope you are also doing well. I can see by your postsd on FB you are keeping very busy. Thanks for stopping in. Love Shane xxx

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/28/2015 2:00:00 AM

Glad to know you'd come out with another fun write, Shane. I penned something today which I'd like to share with everyone, not funny but a bit inspiring. Please visit if you have time. Thanks!

Shane Cooper
Date: 7/28/2015 2:06:00 AM

On my way over my friend. love Shane

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2015 7:01:00 PM

haha, this is great fun!!

Shane Cooper
Date: 7/28/2015 1:57:00 AM

Andrea hi! I am glad you liked it, I had fun writing it. thanks for the visit. love Shane xxx

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/15/2015 12:41:00 AM

lol! Oh but it's good to read a fun write from you Shane...Loved both the lim and the pic! hugs!

Shane Cooper
Date: 7/28/2015 1:55:00 AM

Howdy there Kim, I suppose it is a bit of a change of pace for me. I do enjoy a giggle every now and then. Maybe i will follow the current trend and try my hand at a pooh poem, then again perhaps not. better to leave that to the experts. Thanks for the visit Kim. take care. love Shane xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 7/14/2015 4:54:00 PM

lol - I have to say I hate showers they make me feel claustrophobic so its baths for me to relax in:-) hugs Jan xx7

Shane Cooper
Date: 7/28/2015 1:49:00 AM

Hi Ho Jan, Thanks for stopping by. I don't mind the old shower but if I use a shower with a curtain I alway's think of the scene from the movie Psyco. LOL Love Shane xxx