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Blood dripping on the cherry.... from the robin’s neck... By-Tahera Mannan Contest- One Amazing Line By-Constance~A Rambling Poet~

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2010 3:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this unsual and creative work..Sara

Constance La France

Date: 12/15/2010 1:58:00 PM

Congratulations, Tahera, on third place in my contest, this line is breathtaking and so vivid, it gives the reader pause ~~wonderful~~

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/15/2010 9:34:00 AM

congradulations in Constances contest. john

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/15/2010 8:40:00 AM

congrats on your win Tahera with this wonderful entry

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/15/2010 8:28:00 AM

Congrats, Tahera, on your win in the contest with this unique write. Dan C

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/15/2010 8:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance's Contest, Tahera. Enjoy. Love, audrey

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/15/2010 6:47:00 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest. Eamon

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/15/2010 3:40:00 AM

best wishes on your well-deserved award! enjoy… nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2010 9:41:00 PM

Oh, my, this one is the most like a haiku YET!! Congratutualions, tahera. I like this the best in the top poems. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/14/2010 7:36:00 PM

Congrats TAhera on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line my friend.. enjoy another sweet top ten victory with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 12/14/2010 5:41:00 PM

Tahera, congratulations on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Deb Radke

Date: 12/14/2010 3:11:00 PM

Very good monoku. Very visual and very haunting. Congratulations on your win in the contest.

James Fraser

Date: 12/14/2010 2:01:00 PM

Dark Monoku Tahera, quite a capture in so few words. Many congrats on your win in Constance's contest >> James :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2010 5:27:00 AM

Congratulations Tahera on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 10:32:00 PM

OH MY. THIS IS STUNNING. I LOVE IT!!!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/6/2010 6:52:00 AM

Nice images that the reader can see so easily...thank you always for your knd comments.....with Luv Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/6/2010 6:49:00 AM

Wow! Compelling monoku for the new contest, Tahera.Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/5/2010 10:03:00 PM

enjoyed your entry and the best of luck in the contest,..p.d.

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:22:00 PM

oo! Love it Tahera, are you going to try out my newest contest. I sure hope so. Love your work* (G.L.)SKAT