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Blood dripping on the cherry....
                                              from the robin’s neck...
By-Tahera Mannan
Contest- One Amazing Line
By-Constance~A Rambling Poet~

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Sara Kendrick

December 16, 2010 at 3:01 PM

Congratulations on your win with this unsual and creative work..Sara

Constance La France

December 15, 2010 at 1:58 PM

Congratulations, Tahera, on third place in my contest, this line is breathtaking and so vivid, it gives the reader pause ~~wonderful~~

John Loving Iii

December 15, 2010 at 9:34 AM

congradulations in Constances contest. john

Francine Roberts

December 15, 2010 at 8:40 AM

congrats on your win Tahera with this wonderful entry

Daniel Cwiak

December 15, 2010 at 8:28 AM

Congrats, Tahera, on your win in the contest with this unique write. Dan C

Audrey Haick

December 15, 2010 at 8:11 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance's Contest, Tahera. Enjoy. Love, audrey

Eamon Duffin

December 15, 2010 at 6:47 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest. Eamon

Nette Onclaud

December 15, 2010 at 3:40 AM

best wishes on your well-deserved award! enjoy… nette

Andrea Dietrich

December 14, 2010 at 9:41 PM

Oh, my, this one is the most like a haiku YET!! Congratutualions, tahera. I like this the best in the top poems. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 14, 2010 at 7:36 PM

Congrats TAhera on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line my friend.. enjoy another sweet top ten victory with luv..

John Freeman

December 14, 2010 at 5:41 PM

Tahera, congratulations on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Deb Radke

December 14, 2010 at 3:11 PM

Very good monoku. Very visual and very haunting. Congratulations on your win in the contest.

James Fraser

December 14, 2010 at 2:01 PM

Dark Monoku Tahera, quite a capture in so few words. Many congrats on your win in Constance's contest >> James :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 14, 2010 at 5:27 AM

Congratulations Tahera on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

December 6, 2010 at 10:32 PM

OH MY. THIS IS STUNNING. I LOVE IT!!!

Michael J. Falotico

December 6, 2010 at 6:52 AM

Nice images that the reader can see so easily...thank you always for your knd comments.....with Luv Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

December 6, 2010 at 6:49 AM

Wow! Compelling monoku for the new contest, Tahera.Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

December 5, 2010 at 10:03 PM

enjoyed your entry and the best of luck in the contest,..p.d.

Skat A

December 5, 2010 at 9:22 PM

oo! Love it Tahera, are you going to try out my newest contest. I sure hope so. Love your work* (G.L.)SKAT

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