T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet Poet Limerick

The Shoes I Shared

My favorite shoes I shared with my brother.
Those favorite shoes were like no other.
                   He wore them all the time.
                  Were colored yellowish lime.  
Finally got his own bought by our mother.
                       Teresa Skyles
Entered in SKAT"Shoe"contest

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Andrea Dietrich February 5, 2011 at 12:07 PM VERy cute entry, Teresa. BEst of luck, sweetie!

Dana Smith February 5, 2011 at 11:42 AM Good luck in the contest. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Looking forward to reading more. Dana'lynn

Poet Destroyer A February 4, 2011 at 11:06 PM oooo.. i love it.. so heartfelt.... good luck in the contest..,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 4, 2011 at 4:06 PM Nice funny write on the theme of the contest, teresa

Robert Pettit February 4, 2011 at 2:57 PM This is written very well. I hope those favorite shoes were not pumps.

Michael J. Falotico February 4, 2011 at 2:51 PM Cute one.... made me smile...always Michael