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The Shoals

Walking, talking and skipping stones by the shoals Caress, hug me tender while shining bold eyes Sparkle, playful promises until fall fades Sensibility flew Example: Red cheeked boyfriends tenderly kiss me sweet mouthed under Boulder coverlets winter springtime hug me naked laughing & telling girl friends gossip til autumn Translated RED cheeked BOY/friends TEN/der/ly KISS me SWEET mouthed UN/der BOUL/der COV/er/lets WIN/ter SPRING/time HUG me NA/ked LAUGH/ing and TELL/ing GIRL friends GOS/sip til AU/tumn

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Joe Maverick

Date: 3/25/2012 2:34:00 PM

Hope this does well in the contest Doris,, enjoyed reading today..)

Jack Horne

Date: 3/24/2012 8:31:00 AM

beautiful write for the contest, my friend. I really enjoyed this form, did you?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/23/2012 5:23:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..Is it for a contest?..Thanks for stopping by...Mom..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2012 3:20:00 PM

Keep up the good work, Dors, and let me know when you finish this poem. You're off to a great start! Love, Carolyn

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/20/2012 11:28:00 AM

Doris, you are doing great! Can't wait to read it when completed. Blessings, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/20/2012 9:00:00 AM

Thank you for adding your spices to the soup today Doris and the best to you in the contest. I am enjoying reading all the appetizing poetry posted here today. Have a wonderful week. May inspiration hit the tip of your pen and never let go. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2012 11:00:00 PM

It's kind of hard, huh? I thought so too. But I like where you are going with it. All that fun stuff by the shoals.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/19/2012 4:10:00 PM

Looks like you are doing great on this one. I think it is for a contest if I am not mistaken. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/19/2012 2:45:00 PM

Hi Doris my friend. - Just a reminder: A cup of coffee on same place and same time tomorrow? Love it. :) / :) oxox Anne-Lise

John Rhinem

Date: 3/19/2012 10:10:00 AM

Smile ˜ Your Beauty, Is Simply Fascinating ˜ Would This Perhaps Be A Poe In Response Unto My 'Cat People's' Trilogy My Dear Meow Meow Doris?? * Love Always, John!:) ˜

Date: 3/19/2012 10:13:00 AM

O:-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2012 10:02:00 AM

Nicr...pd