Jan Oskar Hansen Poet Blank verse

The Ship Officer and a Lady

The ship officer and the Lady 

As I waited for my ship to dock at the onion pier,
a clerk came and handed me a bag of garlic for
the ship, I told him I had not ordered any and
showed him my three silver rings on my uniform.
He smirked and said I must have borrowed it to
impress the gullible, I shrank inside the uniform 
and could not see my hands and feet. 
Met a lady who was waiting for the ship too, she
was the wife of the chief engineer, and together
we strolled to the end of the dock, where 
I resentfully threw the bag of garlic into the sea
where it swelled, became a life boat that slowly 
drifted away. Back at the spot where the ship was
supposed to dock we’re told the ship had come 
and gone. The lady sat on a pollard crying, took
her wedding ring off and threw it into the water,
I, who had taken Lasix 40, peed into the same sea 
and its water turned pink. “Truly, this man is
a saint someone whispered”. Confident again 
I swelled in the uniform and could see my hands 
and feet . The clerk asked forgiveness and kissed 
the onyx ring on my left index finger and gave me 
another bag of garlic.

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Kathryn Collins June 1, 2012 at 9:10 AM I resentfully threw the bag of garlic into the sea where it swelled, became a life boat that slowly drifted away. love that

Poet Destroyer A May 31, 2012 at 9:55 PM Jan, oi,, the sounds like a story..i like it..pd Jan Oskar Hansen June 1, 2012 at 9:42 AM thank you Destroyer