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The Ship

This leviathan of welded steel slips through the bays narrow mouth towards open sea. Deep within its hull a shuddering pulse powers a purpose. Set course and slave to schedules, stacked containers cling like gorging ticks to ride its way. Such power shackled to the shortest route between two ports. I have come to imagine it a metaphor for some living thing, to harbour a desire to let it loose and carry a weary soul towards visions seen only in exalted states. There have been days when I have clung to it as it departs the port and in my mind cut all ties to ride the shoulders of southern ocean swells. Coded within us there seems a longing that links us to the sea. Far from land those structures holding who we are give way and what was certain dissolves into doubt. The world tips balanced on a bubble, whilst in the depths something stirs, unkowable, formless, utterly dangerous.

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Date: 4/4/2023 11:26:00 PM
I love the idea expressed in this - the more poetic version of my desire to run in zig zags on occasion - somehow untether myself to whatever is following me. Although reading again there's more to take from the poem.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/5/2023 1:34:00 PM
Thanks for immersing yourself in this one, rather a complex sail to who knows where. It virtually dictated itself so it probably carries some unconscious cargo floating to the surface.

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