The Shinning Star

When the sky is dark
All the stars appear
Shinning brightly up above
Someone stops looks way up
Then close their eyes tight
To make a wish upon that star
It shines brighter than all the 
        other stars
It is the wishing star
For the wishes to come 
               true
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Doll Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 7:38 AM
Wonderful poem, Carlene. I'll be making a wish tonight.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 11:06 AM
Hello Warren Doll, thank you for the lovely comment.We both will be making a wish upon the star. Have a nice day my friend.
Smith Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 12:03 PM
Star light star bright, good one Darlene...
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 2:30 PM
Hello Charlie Smith, thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.
Thayer Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 11:23 AM
Hope my wish comes true Darlene. Nice vision. All the best.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 12:11 PM
Hello Vickie Thayer, one day it will. All the best to you as well. Have a nice day my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 10:10 PM
A beautiful sight Darlene, we all wish for dreams to come true. Tom
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Hello Tom, yes the stars are beautiful. People makes wishes on the brightest star. Have a nice day my friend.
Deo Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 9:08 PM
Yes, amen! Blessings Darlene. Anil
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 12:24 PM
Hello Anil Deo,Amen and blessings to you. Have a nice day my friend.
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