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The Shinning Star

When the sky is dark All the stars appear Shinning brightly up above Someone stops looks way up Then close their eyes tight To make a wish upon that star It shines brighter than all the other stars It is the wishing star For the wishes to come true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/31/2018 7:38:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Carlene. I'll be making a wish tonight.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/31/2018 11:06:00 AM
Hello Warren Doll, thank you for the lovely comment.We both will be making a wish upon the star. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/28/2018 12:03:00 PM
Star light star bright, good one Darlene...
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2018 2:30:00 PM
Hello Charlie Smith, thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/27/2018 11:23:00 AM
Hope my wish comes true Darlene. Nice vision. All the best.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2018 12:11:00 PM
Hello Vickie Thayer, one day it will. All the best to you as well. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/26/2018 10:10:00 PM
A beautiful sight Darlene, we all wish for dreams to come true. Tom
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2018 12:26:00 PM
Hello Tom, yes the stars are beautiful. People makes wishes on the brightest star. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/26/2018 9:08:00 PM
Yes, amen! Blessings Darlene. Anil
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2018 12:24:00 PM
Hello Anil Deo,Amen and blessings to you. Have a nice day my friend.

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