The Shining Sunset

The shining sunset,

with languishing colors,

exhilarates the sky.

But as the light dims,

the soul of it falters,

as if a loss of breath.

Then from its pinnacle,

it falls into the night,

and its velvet curtain!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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July 23, 2021 at 1:06 PM
Hello meru Groen, lovely, I love the sunses. they are beautiful. enjoy your day my frind.
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