The Shine of Autumn Sun

The shine of autumn sun,
 the blink of glowing star,
the moon, a lonely one,
 shed tears that travel far.

Loneliness tells a sad story
 of love that fumbles in the dark.
Love meant for God's greater glory
 but cannot equal that of a simple lark.

The shine of autumn sun
 shed leaves and naked make
the trees that birds will shun,
 the warmth that winter takes.

The love in depths of tenderness
 hides no suffering from the loving one,
for nothing is better than God's warm caress
 at the shine of autumn sun.

The wind and air, so brisk and cold,
 a winter tale that trees don't tell,
the wanting cry of fear that told
 of children, who from the Master fell.

A haunting sound of dying grass
 and skeleton gone of age old trees
whisper pains that never last
 but will someday show his majesty.

The roving sky of white on blue
 with the sun in all its yellow bright
call out to lonely you
 gone is the terrors of the night.

The shine of winter moon,
 the ground of icy treasures won
call out in an envious tune
 I've killed the autumn sun.

The autumn sun no longer shines
 it disappears through winter storms
that close the gate to forgotten time
 and covered the path of loneliness worn.

The winter moon encloses fear
 and fights to rule the sun.
It hopes to shed no human tears
 and now, it's finally won -

Winter moon has killed 
 the autumn sun.


Written back in 1964 
when I was a mere child and first began to write poetry.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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May 13, 2020 at 1:48 PM
Awesome. Love your last stanza, DM.
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October 19, 2015 at 11:45 PM
DM, Congratulations on your sweet win. ~SKAT~
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October 17, 2015 at 1:04 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write DM!
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