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The Shepherd Dog

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This morning I was looking at my dogs My wife searched for these just by pictures Got the bigger one about six years ago The smaller one we just got four months ago It occurred to me this morning One is a Shepherd gather He continues to walk around to gather All of my family checking on us Bringing joy and love to all The new dog is a chiwinnie got him as a pup The fiercest attitude born within He goes next door to bark at German shepherds Luckily they are in a fence and he is quick Our shepherd dog helps us catch him When he is stubborn and wants to do his own thing In this story the meaning of this Is I am gonna love this fierce chiwinnie And watch him grow to be like The Shepherd Dog full of joy and love To settle that beast within he knows Not where it came from

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Valsa George

Date: 1/31/2023 9:04:00 PM

Enjoyed reading about your dogs.... one so aggressive and the other, dutiful and loving ! I too had two dachshunds at two intervals and loved them so much. Now since we have to be away from home for long intervals, we stopped keeping pets at home......and I miss them much. I feel you are determined to make the aggressive grow into an amiable dog. All the Best. Thank you for sharing this story Stephan.

Stephan McBride
Date: 2/1/2023 4:38:00 AM

: ). They are a joy to have,. The little one is learning from the Shepard dog and growing to become like him , a blessing to see, : ).

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/27/2023 12:46:00 PM

A wonderful write/ending. One can see people in your dogs. Have a great weekend................

Stephan McBride
Date: 1/27/2023 3:04:00 PM

All glory to God, amen Paula most definitely is what God revealed, we have that beast within that needs Christ to tame and mold one into a new creature with joy and love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2023 11:42:00 AM

The Chihuahua and Dachshund mix can be easy going but then they can be loud and aggressive. My daughter had one which had some good points and some bad points. I guess the good outweighed the bad in its case. I enjoyed reading this one. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Stephan McBride
Date: 1/26/2023 12:18:00 PM

LOL. Yeah my wife just saw it as a pup and wanted it, my grandma always kept a Chihuahua sit on her lap and it only liked her attacked everyone else : )

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/25/2023 9:12:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your family and pets, I think you are a gen of a human being, Gordon, Hugs, Panadiota xx

Stephan McBride
Date: 1/25/2023 11:17:00 PM

All glory to God for the work He can do in ones life, thank you for for just being so honest and fighting for the good of humanity, it's the evil one running rampant that has this world blind most just get caught up in it not even knowing, sad to see , I had no clue until I got into the word of God what's going on around us, take care my dear friend , hugs

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/24/2023 9:42:00 PM

Love this story, in poetry form, stephen..Harry

Stephan McBride
Date: 1/25/2023 3:01:00 AM

All glory to God, I don't know poetry forms : ). Just write to tell of the glory of God, if I get one in a form that's a blessing: ). Mainly the meaning I wish people could see, May God bless, comfort, guide and fill you with His peace, love, spirit and joy in abundance

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/23/2023 9:52:00 PM

There are lessons to be learned in this story of two very different dogs, who are friends. I loved it, Stephan. :)

Stephan McBride
Date: 1/23/2023 10:44:00 PM

All glory to God, these are my dogs , hopefully the younger one that's like a lil fearless beast will learn from the Shepard dog how to be loving, joyful and peaceful : ). : ).