The Shape of My Art

I'm torn between two points of view, fretting that this little poem-writing I do is silly—no good—just wasting my time, even when I make a nice rhyme, but still it puts a cheer in my heart: It's just the shape of my art !
(Written 18 Dec 2018 for "The Shape of My Art" poetry contest.)

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Date: 1/16/2019 10:53:00 AM
This is really well done Ed, I'm becoming a fan of your writing style!
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Ed Morris
Date: 1/16/2019 12:40:00 PM
Much appreciated, John.
Date: 12/29/2018 2:36:00 AM
Woww that is extremely beautiful!! My favourite shape poem because of its simplicity and double meaning; I think this is the best. And the rhyme makes you want to sing :))
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Date: 12/29/2018 9:28:00 AM
Many thanks, Sneha. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 12/28/2018 8:39:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this great poem, Ed , very well written. Coagulations on your win! Happy New Year. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Ed Morris
Date: 12/29/2018 9:29:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 12/28/2018 8:36:00 PM
Love! Congrats!
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Ed Morris
Date: 12/29/2018 9:30:00 AM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 12/28/2018 8:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your podium win! Torn between two points of view ~ lovely.
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Ed Morris
Date: 12/29/2018 9:30:00 AM
Thank you, P. M.
Date: 12/28/2018 4:07:00 PM
The refreshing simplicity of your poem is delightful, Ed. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 12/28/2018 4:19:00 PM
Thank you, Line. This is the first time I've ever tried a shape poem. It was fun! Your contest name inspired me, obviously. :-)
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