The Shanghai Sonnet

Congealed upon the banks of this
tamed dragon sprawl stacks of crude buildings.
Concrete covers all but two glassy kings,
thick smoggy gusts give them a grimy kiss.
Insipid pillars choke sunlight, endless
roads incise the very earth, wings
of apartments cram into ev’rything,
ev’rywhere stacks upon stacks of units.
Herein lies the future, our dystopia
has arrived through the hazy looking glass.
Perhaps a reminder, utopia
is not coming, or maybe the hourglass
has but some time left. Then the route is clear.
We must turn everything around. And fast.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 3:07 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 26, 2016 at 11:11 AM
ASHLEY, Excellent read. Great flowing piece. Have a nice day. ** SKAT **
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January 3, 2014 at 6:10 PM
A fine metrical verse... Enjoyed.. Linda
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 11:35 AM
Thank you for always sharing your excellent poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Ashley. I hope you have a great weekend filled with inspiration. I will be back the first of the week and hope to see more of your poetry posted here to read. Love, Carol
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March 1, 2012 at 6:49 PM
welcome to poetry soup!! enjoyed reading our work!!
Guzzi Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 6:36 PM
very good verse and one true observation the form is sonnet but it is not iambic pentameter. Light & Love
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