The Shame, So Shamelessly Held

I cannot say with any certainty
why it came to me, then, there,
but it came to me
unexpected as birth.
The kitchen was bright as the summer
and comfortable as the paving
next to the swimming pool.
Our hosts were pleasant as we were,
the conversation pleasant as our hosts
as pleasant as we were.
Yet somehow it came to me
that there might be a man at the table
unpleasant and angry as life itself,
and somehow it came to me
that he might be me.
I didn't like him much
but I wouldn't dare tell him,
he was far too unpleasant and angry,
I'd seen his kind before.
He was shorter and stouter than I would be
but he might be me.
He was made of muscle and malice
and maybe some contraband too.
He had a mohawk, or something not far off,
they'd not been seen much 
in polite society, not yet.
If it was good enough for Mr T
it was good enough for a swaggering bandit
returning from prison, or from the war,
or a crack-house on the fringes of midnight.
He ranted some, he spat it out with relish.
I'm not sure who he ranted at
but he ranted, maybe at everyone.
He may have ranted at me just a little,
perhaps because I let him,
but if you'd met him you would have too.

13th July 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 11/16/2018 12:24:00 AM
What a creative mind you have, sir! I especially liked the following lines: ...unexpected as birth... ...He was made of muscle and malice...
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 11/16/2018 7:19:00 AM
Thanks, Luke, appreciated, very pleased that you enjoyed.
Date: 10/13/2018 12:14:00 AM
You have some kinda heart...and talent that turns me green...with envy.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 10/13/2018 1:47:00 AM
Thanks, Q, very kind, BUT... I've read a couple of your pieces this morning and your pen is as impressive as any.
Date: 7/26/2018 9:08:00 AM
Brilliant verses from a golden pen.. A true pleasure to read this fine morn!!! A fav ..
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/26/2018 9:39:00 AM
Thanks Robert, I write for those who appreciate it, and your words are very encouraging.
Date: 7/21/2018 2:55:00 PM
I love this poem...It made me read it over and over..So much to find berween the lines...Awesome.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/22/2018 1:33:00 AM
Thank you, I'm pleased if you enjoy.
Date: 7/18/2018 9:12:00 AM
You paint your words skillfully. I am impressed.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 8/11/2018 2:55:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate the encouragement.
Date: 7/13/2018 12:31:00 PM
Chewy tasty poetry, filling. Love it. xomo
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/14/2018 3:33:00 AM
A million thank you's !
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