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The Shallow Water

I dipped my toes into the water Warning me not to was my father He said the water was home Home to a monster to whom the sea was his throne Then my toe felt something course Rush over my skin like a horse By then it was too late My body, I fear, had been ate And so from only the shallows My soul had entered that gallows

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Skat A

Date: 4/19/2016 10:48:00 PM

wow, awesome imagery. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2016 12:14:00 AM

Deep write, Kyle, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@