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The Shadow

A shadow haunts me everywhere of vacillating shape and size; by day I drag about the form that nightly, suffocating, lies upon me in my bed. A shadow haunts me everywhere; my heart has never yet been free. it breathes the very air I breathe and from my hands steals savagely what would be wine and bread. A shadow haunts me everywhere and loosed...Oh! How I long to be a spirit child of lightning grace forever set at liberty: the selfish shadow dead. © 1987, Faye Lanham Gibson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/22/2014 7:08:00 AM
One day you will live in a city of light where no shadow will fall. I just love this piece what tremendous creativity.
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Date: 4/18/2014 6:59:00 PM
i enjoyed this poem and how beautifully you've used your rhyming. congrats on your win!
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Faye Gibson
Date: 4/18/2014 7:26:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene. Hope to visit your work soon.
Date: 4/18/2014 3:50:00 PM
Hi Faye, this was a lovely poem, i was happy to have it in my contest... Congratulations... ... By the way I have something to say to all who supported my ANY POEM # 19 contest. Shame on me, Shame on me! Please forgive me, for not taking the time, to CONGRATULATE and adore all the winning poems for a second or third time. I AM VERY LATE:(-- I was a little mad at the world. However, this is my winning list, I will give everyone the same love and support. I'm dropping by with a Copy Paste note from the bottom of my heart. I am sorry, it's not like me, to walk away, as if nothing. Truly, I appreciate every winning poem, and HM. LOVE LINDA
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Faye Gibson
Date: 4/18/2014 7:27:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. Enjoyed the contest...and your work. I have been reading some do your poems.
Date: 4/17/2014 2:26:00 PM
Well bust my buttons!! You entered a contest and made the winner's list! I see many more wins to come...SO proud of you my friend! - Tim
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Faye Gibson
Date: 4/17/2014 4:35:00 PM
If I do, will you sing it? Thank you, Tim. And thanks again for keeping after me to join Poetry Soup. I needed you to do that and I need to write.
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 4/17/2014 2:32:00 PM
Got so exited about your win that I forgot to tell you how much I like the poem! Love the repeating line to start each verse especially. Add a chorus and you've got a song...
Date: 4/17/2014 11:02:00 AM
Get rid of that shadow dear Faye....put on surrounding lights :) Enjoyable poem. cu around. // paul
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Faye Gibson
Date: 4/17/2014 4:33:00 PM
Thank you, Paul.
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/17/2014 11:03:00 AM
congrats on win, by the way :)
Date: 4/17/2014 7:38:00 AM
Congrats on your win Faye. Great poem.
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Date: 4/17/2014 3:03:00 AM
Very fine poetry worth a great win ! Congrats Gibson !!
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Faye Gibson
Date: 4/17/2014 5:43:00 AM
Thank you. New to all of this on poetry soup but enjoying it. I will pay you a visit. I am loving reading and discovering good writers.

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