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The Seven Horses

as the sea softly douses the thirsty beach seven horses fly January 6, 2018 Cliche used: opposites attract Monoku 5 Cliche Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/9/2018 6:38:00 PM

Back to congratulate you, Probir. Hugs Eve ~`*

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/12/2018 6:51:00 AM

Thank you, Eve for your nice words ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2018 6:21:00 PM

a very interesting take on that cliche. I also chose opposites attract. Congrats on your win, Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/9/2018 6:29:00 AM

Yes, Andrea ... the attraction between the opposites here is so intense that it develops the power to generate as many as seven horses in flight ... Thank you ...

Gayle Rodd

Date: 1/7/2018 2:12:00 PM

Such calming beauty in a short verse

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/9/2018 6:30:00 AM

Much thanks for the nice appreciation ...

Joseph May

Date: 1/6/2018 3:08:00 PM

Congrats on your win Probir

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/7/2018 9:25:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2018 1:41:00 PM

- Probir, congratulations on your great second place in the contest - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/7/2018 9:29:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine ...

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/6/2018 12:09:00 PM

Terrific Probir, congratulations...

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/7/2018 9:31:00 AM

Thank you for enjoying, Charlie ...

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/6/2018 11:26:00 AM

Spectacular imagery. Congrats on your win, Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/7/2018 9:32:00 AM

Thank you for liking, Line ...

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/6/2018 9:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this gorgeous Monoku!

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/7/2018 9:40:00 AM

Seems you enjoyed very much! ... Thanks ...

Silent One

Date: 1/6/2018 9:23:00 AM

Very philosophical... Congratulations on your placement in the cliche monoku contest..

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/7/2018 9:43:00 AM

Well, in case there is a glimpse of philosophy in the rainbow , that is an additional gain for me ... Thank you so much for the placement, Silent ...

Eve Roper

Date: 1/5/2018 11:05:00 PM

Great monoku, Probir, luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/7/2018 9:44:00 AM

Thank you, Eve .