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The Seven Horses

as the sea softly douses the thirsty beach  seven horses fly



January 6, 2018
Cliche used: opposites attract
Monoku 5 Cliche Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One

Copyright © Probir Gupta | Year Posted 2018

romantic lovesunshinemonoku

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January 9, 2018 at 6:38 PM

Back to congratulate you, Probir. Hugs Eve ~`*

January 12, 2018 at 6:51 AM

Thank you, Eve for your nice words ...

Andrea Dietrich

January 8, 2018 at 6:21 PM

a very interesting take on that cliche. I also chose opposites attract. Congrats on your win, Probir.

January 9, 2018 at 6:29 AM

Yes, Andrea ... the attraction between the opposites here is so intense that it develops the power to generate as many as seven horses in flight ... Thank you ...

January 7, 2018 at 2:12 PM

Such calming beauty in a short verse

January 9, 2018 at 6:30 AM

Much thanks for the nice appreciation ...

January 6, 2018 at 3:08 PM

Congrats on your win Probir

January 7, 2018 at 9:25 AM

Thank you, Joseph ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 6, 2018 at 1:41 PM

- Probir, congratulations on your great second place in the contest - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

January 7, 2018 at 9:29 AM

Thank you, Sunshine ...

January 6, 2018 at 12:09 PM

Terrific Probir, congratulations...

January 7, 2018 at 9:31 AM

Thank you for enjoying, Charlie ...

January 6, 2018 at 11:26 AM

Spectacular imagery. Congrats on your win, Probir.

January 7, 2018 at 9:32 AM

Thank you for liking, Line ...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 6, 2018 at 9:46 AM

Congratulations on your win with this gorgeous Monoku!

January 7, 2018 at 9:40 AM

Seems you enjoyed very much! ... Thanks ...

January 6, 2018 at 9:23 AM

Very philosophical... Congratulations on your placement in the cliche monoku contest..

January 7, 2018 at 9:43 AM

Well, in case there is a glimpse of philosophy in the rainbow , that is an additional gain for me ... Thank you so much for the placement, Silent ...

January 5, 2018 at 11:05 PM

Great monoku, Probir, luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

January 7, 2018 at 9:44 AM

Thank you, Eve .

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