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The Seven Deadly Sins Seven deadly sins: Pride, Greed, Lust, Anger, Envy, Gluttony and Sloth. No altruism found here; One-way street to selfishness. Pride, Greed...self-centered. All goals directed inward To please only one... Taker-Greed grabs, swindles all; Boaster-Pride...smug, but lonely. Lust and Gluttony; Human over-indulgence Of diverse cravings. Lust for flesh...Gluttony, food. Both are selfish abusers. Anger and Envy Sad sins of self-indulgence; They feed each other. Envy hates...wants what it sees; Anger hates...wants its own way. Sloth..non-creator lives to just breathe, eat, sleep, be. Only take, no give. No motion and no action. To be; means only to be. Seven deadly sins: Pride, Greed, Lust, Anger, Envy, Gluttony and Sloth. No altruism found here; One-way street to selfishness. Sandra M. Haight ~8th Place~ Contest: The Deadly Seven Sponsor: John Lawless Judged: 02/07/2016

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Date: 2/16/2016 10:22:00 PM
Sandra, thank you for supporting my comment. That was nice of you. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/8/2016 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra! You truly are deserving! :)-HANS
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/8/2016 5:12:00 PM
Thank you for your visit to my poem and your congrats! Much appreciate, Hansteven! Sandra
Date: 2/7/2016 12:46:00 PM
This is an excellent tanka suite! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/7/2016 8:17:00 PM
Hi Janice, thank you very much. I appreciate your visit and supportive comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/7/2016 10:58:00 AM
Sandra, Congrats on your awesome win. Love LINDA
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/7/2016 8:17:00 PM
Hi Linda, thank you once again! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/7/2016 9:03:00 AM
Succinct, to the point, seven sins, often mated, in a Tanka....a creative poetic interpretation. Thanks for participating Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/7/2016 8:16:00 PM
Thank you, John, for another inspiring contest. I enjoyed working on my entry, and I appreciate your positive comments and nice placement! Sandra
Date: 1/24/2016 4:41:00 PM
Very well done, Sandra. So all seven can be discussed then. For some reason I was thinking to focus on just one. Good luck. I rarely win in his contests. probably will just stay out of it!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/24/2016 8:28:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/24/2016 2:46:00 PM
well written Sandra...best of luck in the contest
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/24/2016 8:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, White Sage. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/24/2016 1:15:00 PM
Sandra, this is great! Perfect for the contest, good luck :) *smiles* -luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/24/2016 8:27:00 PM
Hi Laura, thank you for your visit and encouraging comments! Hugs, Sandra

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