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The Seven Deadly Sins

The Seven Deadly Sins Seven deadly sins: Pride, Greed, Lust, Anger, Envy, Gluttony and Sloth. No altruism found here; One-way street to selfishness. Pride, Greed...self-centered. All goals directed inward To please only one... Taker-Greed grabs, swindles all; Boaster-Pride...smug, but lonely. Lust and Gluttony; Human over-indulgence Of diverse cravings. Lust for flesh...Gluttony, food. Both are selfish abusers. Anger and Envy Sad sins of self-indulgence; They feed each other. Envy hates...wants what it sees; Anger hates...wants its own way. Sloth..non-creator lives to just breathe, eat, sleep, be. Only take, no give. No motion and no action. To be; means only to be. Seven deadly sins: Pride, Greed, Lust, Anger, Envy, Gluttony and Sloth. No altruism found here; One-way street to selfishness. Sandra M. Haight ~8th Place~ Contest: The Deadly Seven Sponsor: John Lawless Judged: 02/07/2016
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A   Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 10:22 PM
Sandra, thank you for supporting my comment. That was nice of you. Love LINDA
Selfa Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations Sandra! You truly are deserving! :)-HANS
Haight Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Thank you for your visit to my poem and your congrats! Much appreciate, Hansteven! Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 12:46 PM
This is an excellent tanka suite! Congrats on your win. Janice
Haight Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 8:17 PM
Hi Janice, thank you very much. I appreciate your visit and supportive comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Sandra, Congrats on your awesome win. Love LINDA
Haight Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 8:17 PM
Hi Linda, thank you once again! Hugs, Sandra
Lawless Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Succinct, to the point, seven sins, often mated, in a Tanka....a creative poetic interpretation. Thanks for participating Sandra.
Haight Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 8:16 PM
Thank you, John, for another inspiring contest. I enjoyed working on my entry, and I appreciate your positive comments and nice placement! Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 4:41 PM
Very well done, Sandra. So all seven can be discussed then. For some reason I was thinking to focus on just one. Good luck. I rarely win in his contests. probably will just stay out of it!
Haight Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
Sage Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 2:46 PM
well written Sandra...best of luck in the contest
Haight Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Thank you so much, White Sage. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Sandra, this is great! Perfect for the contest, good luck :) *smiles* -luloo
Haight Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Hi Laura, thank you for your visit and encouraging comments! Hugs, Sandra
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