The Serpent Coils

The serpent coils
    'fore he strikes
      piercing hiss
      sordid sway
        ~ fearsome bite

    Paranoiacs
    flash warnings too
    Those who ignore
      ~ will later rue
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Krutsinger Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:08 PM
Difficult to ignore
Wolf Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:24 PM
Although surely ignorance is bliss...
Shaw Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 3:18 PM
Nice call, Gershon, but, I rather stay paranoiac, be safe than sorry . . . : /
Shaw Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 4:29 AM
I had to google that, Gershon, hell bells . . . *o*
Wolf Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 9:05 PM
I myself prefer paregoric to paranoiac. lol. Different strokes... :) gw
Baker Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 8:00 AM
Great imagery in this one, Gershon. We all need to pay attention, usually there's a warning in life-or-death situations. Bill
Wolf Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 9:01 PM
That's right. We ignore so many warnings. 'Blindness' is not merely loss of vision! Thanks, Bill. Cheers, gw
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