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Written Dec 8 2025 for Egos of War Contest sponsored by Craig Cornish

The Selfish Egos of War

It’s usually old men who pretend
They have something to lose 
In sending younger stronger men
To war, it’s a selfish thing to do

If your youth abandoned you
You seek glory in other ways
As a fertile man in youth
Rarely did you save the day

Unless you were a veteran 
Which most likely you were not
For if so you would know
About semper fi going in hot

You would be more aware
Of how it feels to lose a fight
When boots on the ground is a dare
And everyone will not survive
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Maverick Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 9:22 PM
I percive you fight here the hardest War Karen..The one against disreason And humans corrupt.' Who are soul-ess And espouse a soul-less doctrine.' That Only makes sense to the corrupt.'
Jones Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 10:20 PM
Agreed! Thanks for sharing Joe!
Peck Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 8:21 AM
A nice poem, Karen. We will never learn the disaster of war, it seems. It's time for those who make munitions and gain from war, to pick up a rifle themselves.
Jones Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 8:38 AM
Well since I’m diagnosed as bipolar I can’t legally pick up a rifle. lol but I can put on the armor of God! Thanks for the compliment and for reading Ann! Happy holidays!
Wolf Avatar
December 8, 2025 at 9:01 PM
Old men seem to love 'playing war' with young people's lives. Disgusting, isn't it? Shout it to the rooftops, Karen.
Jones Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 12:51 AM
It is and will do! Thanks Gershon!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 8, 2025 at 1:28 PM
We owe them a life lived well!
Jones Avatar
December 8, 2025 at 1:59 PM
Agreed
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