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" THE CROSSING " MY PHOTO, ©

May be an image of body of water

The Self and the Heart

Oh, my heart,
You and I have been through many stormy, as well as, 
Many peaceful days during our trip through life.

Sometimes,
We have laughed and we have cried so loudly that we were heard far 
Into the future, 
But
We have learned that both sorrow and joy are interconnected and that 
One feeling cannot exist without the presence of the other. 
Moreover, 
We realized that the intensity of the feelings produced in both cases,
Depends on the intensity of the feeling caused by its opposite:
The more we suffer, the more we are able to feel joy and the greater  
The joy we feel, the greater the pain that would follow. 

Now, after so many decades of confrontations on the path of existence, 
You and I have become friends.  
I do not try to control you anymore and you do not have many 
Reasons to provoke me with your capricious demands,
Thus 
It is wise that a truce we have, finally, declared. A truce, that can help 
Both of us, my friend, cross in peace the threshold of eternity!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
   26 October 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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October 26, 2022 at 12:08 PM
Dearest Demetrios, Your poetry includes some really vivid descriptions and metaphors coming straight from the heart. Excellent writing with such a fantastic and profound degree of insight and wisdom.
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October 26, 2022 at 3:23 PM
You are always so gracious with your comments, my dearest friend, Lasaad, however, as you know the greatest part of the merit goes to the one who inspires us. Thank you and blessings!
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October 26, 2022 at 7:41 AM
- Written with soul and heart ... excellent poem, my friend :) - hugs
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October 26, 2022 at 3:19 PM
Yes, this is the way we ought to write, with heart and soul. For the soul is inspired by the divine and the heart is writing down what the inspiration dictates. my dearest friend, Anne-Lise. Blessings!
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October 26, 2022 at 7:04 AM
So true, Demetrios. I've learned through the choices I've made, that the more my Love of God and his creation grows, the more emphathy I feel for others; the more pain I experience as I try to understand this thing called life. Thank you for another FAV for my list and the wisdom you humble share with us, my dear friend. Bill
Trifiatis Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 3:16 PM
Your valuable comment humbles me, my dearest friend, Bill. I am glad to share with you the fruits of my inspiration. Nothing is written without His help. Thank you. Be blessed!
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 5:29 AM
Much to gleam from this discourse with the heart, my friend. We are at peace when the heart is. Wisdom words!
Trifiatis Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 3:11 PM
Your observation is absolutely correct, my dearest friend, Vijay. Thank you! Be blessed.
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October 26, 2022 at 12:39 AM
A verse of wisdom Demetrios, hoping that the truce holds in all our lives. Tom
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October 26, 2022 at 2:00 AM
Tom, my dearest friend, I have missed your visits and constructive comments. I thought you were abroad. Happy to see you again. Thank you for your gracious comment and the good news. God bless you, as always.
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