The Self and the Heart

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" THE CROSSING " MY PHOTO, ©

May be an image of body of water

Oh, my heart, You and I have been through many stormy, as well as, Many peaceful days during our trip through life. Sometimes, We have laughed and we have cried so loudly that we were heard far Into the future, But We have learned that both sorrow and joy are interconnected and that One feeling cannot exist without the presence of the other. Moreover, We realized that the intensity of the feelings produced in both cases, Depends on the intensity of the feeling caused by its opposite: The more we suffer, the more we are able to feel joy and the greater The joy we feel, the greater the pain that would follow. Now, after so many decades of confrontations on the path of existence, You and I have become friends. I do not try to control you anymore and you do not have many Reasons to provoke me with your capricious demands, Thus It is wise that a truce we have, finally, declared. A truce, that can help Both of us, my friend, cross in peace the threshold of eternity! © Demetrios Trifiatis 26 October 2022

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Sotto Poet

Date: 10/26/2022 12:08:00 PM

Dearest Demetrios, Your poetry includes some really vivid descriptions and metaphors coming straight from the heart. Excellent writing with such a fantastic and profound degree of insight and wisdom.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/26/2022 3:23:00 PM

You are always so gracious with your comments, my dearest friend, Lasaad, however, as you know the greatest part of the merit goes to the one who inspires us. Thank you and blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2022 7:41:00 AM

- Written with soul and heart ... excellent poem, my friend :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/26/2022 3:19:00 PM

Yes, this is the way we ought to write, with heart and soul. For the soul is inspired by the divine and the heart is writing down what the inspiration dictates. my dearest friend, Anne-Lise. Blessings!

Bill Baker

Date: 10/26/2022 7:04:00 AM

So true, Demetrios. I've learned through the choices I've made, that the more my Love of God and his creation grows, the more emphathy I feel for others; the more pain I experience as I try to understand this thing called life. Thank you for another FAV for my list and the wisdom you humble share with us, my dear friend. Bill

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/26/2022 3:16:00 PM

Your valuable comment humbles me, my dearest friend, Bill. I am glad to share with you the fruits of my inspiration. Nothing is written without His help. Thank you. Be blessed!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/26/2022 5:29:00 AM

Much to gleam from this discourse with the heart, my friend. We are at peace when the heart is. Wisdom words!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/26/2022 3:11:00 PM

Your observation is absolutely correct, my dearest friend, Vijay. Thank you! Be blessed.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/26/2022 12:39:00 AM

A verse of wisdom Demetrios, hoping that the truce holds in all our lives. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/26/2022 2:00:00 AM

Tom, my dearest friend, I have missed your visits and constructive comments. I thought you were abroad. Happy to see you again. Thank you for your gracious comment and the good news. God bless you, as always.