The Seeker

AGAIN, from deep within justice…..asks strange questions A Hawk flies overhead why am I spared? 03/14/11 6:59 pm

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Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/11/2011 11:55:00 AM

Fate can be cruel or fate can be kind. Good little write.

James Foulk

Date: 4/20/2011 1:40:00 PM

very creative piece of fine poetry. thank you for your comment on Light of Day.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2011 10:26:00 PM

how are we today? Jimbo,,, nice i hope,. seem like someone is pundering on life,,, well i ask thinks like that all the time... i feel like a mouse at times wondering... how i survived another day,.,,, spreading my wings like a hawk just to get away.. with it all,, enjoyed,,. have a nice St, Patty's day,,,p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/15/2011 10:50:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this today James. Have a wonderful week filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2011 7:41:00 PM

This is so nice. It looks like it could go with that picture of the Indian and a flute, which was in Constance's contest! It's always nice to see your poems. Luv, Andrea

James Peranteau

Date: 3/14/2011 6:01:00 PM

I am sure the range of truth is in your poetic thoughts here dear poet, as we all will grasp at straws, trying to decipher the reason this Hawk spared the likes of you. Great write Sir ! much love, james

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/14/2011 5:19:00 PM

Fate perhaps? Enjoyed your write. BG

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2011 5:04:00 PM

Maybe he wasn't hungry..Enjoyed reading today...Sara