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The Seducing Spring

Wow.....She is coming!! We can smell her fragrance encompassed in the air. Garden and meadows looks appealing with her flair. Greenery seems well dressed on the lawn. Bird chirps are soothing for the ears at dawn. Visualising colourful butterflies everywhere are enthralling. Twittering birds on tree twigs are always exploring. During your arrival we would lavishly spend money, By going worldwide on an aesthetic journey. You are the one who triggers romance in our mind. Hence we all cherish you being love blind. So tell us ..Dear spring, Why do you always bloom only after the fall? Attempt to come at any moment coz your loved by all. Elderly and young people yearn to gaze at you whenever they lack peace. So agree for once and we will hire you for lease. 28-4-2020 ~DEEPA~ Note1:*Spring Rhyme Poetry Contest* Sponsored by Emile Pinet Note 2: Placed as Honorable Mention In BRIAN'S CHOICE 9,any form, any theme poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Anil Deo

Date: 5/25/2020 2:15:00 AM

Personification of Spring wins! I usually do not like "he" and "she" for Nature, but U did well in this poem. Question is symbolic, "Why do you always bloom only after the fall?" because Spring comes after WINTER (not Fall/ or autumn) right?

V. Deepa
Date: 5/25/2020 3:26:00 AM

Hello sir, Thanks a bunch for stopping by and reviewing my poem.I am glad that you liked my poem.:-)And am grateful for your kind appreciation too. Yes you are right..!!:-) (Summer,Monsoon,Autumn ,Pre-winter, Winter ,Spring)it is supposed to occur in this order coz seasons are caused due to tilt in earth's axis and the revolution of our planet around sun. But nowadays due to global warming everything is helter skelter and thus there are variations. I focussed more on spring in this work.:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa.